I don't like this Hermione. I always think of her taking the high road. This is definitely wrong!

although your hermione character are not my favorite, you potrayed her very realistic. hermione as a normal teenager girl. she make mistake, I think most of teenager (esp when they on fragille situation) will do that, even though she's bright :D

Really? Hermione let's herself be fucked in an alcove for her first time? By Harry, no less, her buddy, who's now married and to be a father any day? Seriously, this is not how I imagine Hermione to act.

Kudos for the story idea, it's very intriguing. Franky, though, I don't like Hermione at all. She's bitchy and behaves like a spoilt child. If I were Severus, I'd flat out refuse to age her - she'd even be worse being so childish in a woman's body. She's supposed to be intelligent, she should know that aging her body is not going to change a thing about her situation. What is she so angry about? What 'atrocities' has she seen? She spent five minutes in a room with a book, while the world moved on. It's a tough situation, especially that her parents are dead, but that doesn't seem to bother her quite as much as the fact that Ron married Lavender. Or Pansy, depending on which chapter has the correct information.

Your writing is good and I'm hoping that there will be some development in Hermione's character in chapters to come. You have Severus down nicely. I like him very much.

Loved it!

Really enjoyed this story.

I have enjoyed this story from beginning to end

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story with us. I can't wait for the next one.

A perfect end good choice Hermione may be suspicious about it but she don't care she is only sad for Ginny and her child. Great ending

This story was amazing and the epilogue was wonderful, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

The glove! Just like O.J.!

Hawaii is fantastic, excellent choice!

He FUCKING deserved that!
Wonderful epilogue!

Complimenti, peccato è già finita la storia .

Love it great chapter, Amortentia is the coolest cat ever good she only was unconscious and Severus punches Harry loved tat as well the are finally a couple or at least trying out how it will work between them, I'm excited to read the final chapter. *cookies for inspiration and the great work*

Oooooh! You're safe now, no mutiny, no riot. That was awesome! I loved the way Severus destroyed that little bastard's face! Now, Sev can kick his arse one more time. I mean, he owes him another beating! Potty abused Hermione and attacked Amortentia! Two strikes, two punishments!