Reviews for Fine Tuning
ZeloxMidnight chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Kinda gutted as there isnt many male oc fanfics its mostly female oc x edward or other males. So its hard to come across decent story male oc fics
catspats31 chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
WargishBoromirFan chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
It's not badly written, but due to the explicit sexual content and interactive reader insert, this doesn't belong on Fanfiction dot net anymore than it would in the Dragonball section. FFn just doesn't want the risks of libel or providing porn to minors. Their site isn't set up to filter MA content. If you want, PM me and I'll try to get you an invite for A03, which does allow explicit work, or you could post it on Adult Fanfiction, Tumblr, LiveJournal, or the like. Good luck.