So Mommy and daddy fell in Love after Mommy tried to kill daddy?

*2 weeks later*

"Daddy Daddy! I tried to kill my crush and I did it! How do I ask him Out now?!"

This weird scenario Just Popped Into my head, Imagine telling your Kids their parents met while they were trying to kill eachother.

I have to ask about "aunt Ellis" are Ellis and Ez together. I ship them . She'd be a great queen. She kinda reminds me of sarai

Awww, that's so cute.
Wait, Aunt Ellis? Does that mean Ellis and Ezran married? I ship them together...

Cute story, dialogue may need some work however. Nice touch that the daughter's name is a portmanteau of theirs.

I’ve already explained I am reviewing each of the nine stories you posted in twenty-four hours because I think you’re rushing things, but one of my other concerns is I’ve got to question whether you’re old enough to have an account on this site. If you’re not yet thirteen, you’re not allowed to have an account here as this site, but your writing does come across as if you are under thirteen. If you are thirteen or older, that’s another effect rushing what you write has – you misrepresent yourself.

However, in this we’ve got the issue of painting parenthood as a fluffy thing, which – even if you aren’t under the age of thirteen, this tells me you are definitely a very young writer. Fluff is okay, but it can also reveal things like the fact you are a young writer if that is all you write. Of course, we’ve also got the fact you’ve repeated themes twice in two sets of fics out of the nine stories you’ve written, so I want to push the fact you need to think outside of the box with what you write.

Another concern – why is Harrow alive? He’s dead in the show, and no – the fact this is AU doesn’t fly. You’ve got to build up such things, but it also seems like your modernizing a series which isn’t at all modern in a LOT of your stories. That’s not a good thing.