Reviews for Toru's Parable
mahdi22.theotakuhitman415 chapter 1 . 3/27
The people need more
Tanya von Degurechaff chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
does that mean there are 2 Izuku And Toruu ?
253910 chapter 1 . 10/26/2019
I read this story shortly after you first posted it, and that’s nothing particularly special. I read new story’s all the time. Then the story kept coming back in my head, and I read it again. That’s something I rarely do. Lately I’ve been thinking about it again, and so I reread it for a third time. For me reading a story three times, practically never happens. I just wanted you to know that this ficlette is so unique and well written and I enjoy it very, very much. I greatly appreciate both the concept and quality and if I’m being honest, I’ll probably come back and reread it again later. This short fic has connected to me somehow, it’s an absolute gem and I think even though it’s only one chapter, and incomplete, I think it deserves more recognition. Thank you so much for writing and posting this story!
Dreiundzwanzig chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
So, what you're trying to tell me is that you wrote this incredible interesting first chapter with roughly ten thousand words to it and then you just like ... quit?

I want more and I want it now, dammit!

But in all seriousness this here is some solid fiction work. It's original without shitting on canon and your writing is nice.
Linariel chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
This story is intense. Seeing Izuku struggle with identity and morals while he pretends to be Tomura is wow amazing. I love seeing Toru shine through this story as his Izuku's constant support. In an alternate universe I could honestly see this all happening. So rough and fantastic all at the same time. This story is gem that needs more time to shine some good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
charm13insomnia chapter 1 . 3/5/2019
cool fic
PuppyCake chapter 1 . 12/19/2018
Neeeeeeeeeeeed mooooooooaaaaaaaeerrrrr!
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 12/6/2018
Good fanfic. poor Izuku. Hagakure is amazing. lol at the preview. seriously. conflict of interest... Shigaraki was stupid.
emiya-excalibur chapter 1 . 12/6/2018
Hot damn this is good! can't wait for part two.
Samurai538 chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
This is a very interesting concept and you've already done such a great job with it. I can't help but feel that something is going to go very wrong in the next part but I'm looking forward to the final part all the same.
ArkenX chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
I was gonna read but it said (friendship)
ehh ill read it either way
BoopyDoop745 chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
Loving it 3
Keep it up
RyuujinHimari chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
I really like this. it's a shame your only writing 2 chapters. I somehow wish for at least 5.

amazing story keep it up. PLUS ULTRA
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2018
THIS. This is what I look for when I read Fanfiction. Not the endless sea of dross and dregs that do nothing but tell the canon story with a slight, nearly unnoticeable change. The cloyingly vain and terrible self inserts and oc love interests. The patently ridiculous romance takes between people who despise each other and the "oh but he has a good heart" redemption stories of the absolutely irredeemable. This is a needle in the haystack, a diamond in the rough. And by god, it's even edited for spelling and grammar AND proper flow! Hats off to you.
Yukio Mustang chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
I love this story. This idea is unique and I love how much thought went into it. It is really amazing
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