wow

Omg! That was so good. It was heart rendering and heart felt. Very nicely done. I think you ended it just right, too. I look forward to your next story. -leila

Holy shit! This can become a story. What happened to Rosalie, Emmett, Jasper and the real Bella?

This was such a ride from beginning to end. Wow. It really leaves you feeling for all of them.