Why 11 knights, why not either 12 like last time or just 10 this time?

So after reading the first chapter of your new story my only opinion is that I don’t think that I like the idea about the creatures of Grimm being more intelligent than it’s supposed to be. Personally I’ve yet to be more impressed than your previous story but I’ll keep reading and till the end and see if my opinion changes.

This story is pretty much dead.

He decides to bend over and tell him what to do why? Because they saved his life? He could always just pay them and go away like wtf?

Why in the living hell is he letting them push him around. They have no right to demand to research ANYTHING. And please Dont let this be a thing where he just helps team rwby

I liked "remnants of another world" much better then what your writing here.
Also why did you change you name "dusks library" was also much better then now.

Figure I drop a review to keep things fresh.

I like the way the story's going but it's starting to get a little long in the tooth and I'm curious to know where it's leading. It's going on a few months now and all of us want to know how your holding up.

Hope your health is still in the green and you haven't had any relapses.

aw fuck, a SI

And then he bends over and Ozpin fucks him. Because why not? Seems reasonable enough.

Look, if you can't be arsed to actually make use of characterization in order to avoid blasting your 'plot' apart, don't bother writing at all.

Oh look, another spineless worthless MC. Is he also gonna join Beacon!? Have hi-jinks with RWBY?!

Shit

Good Chapter!

Didn't think Merlot was actually skilled in combat. At least, that's what I think since he caught Shade's attack before it could even hit him.

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Haha, Yatsuachi at towering 3 ft TALL