I enjoyed this! Every single scene and feeling, especially the funny stuff. I could see it in my head as I read, and it was like watching a two-part episode because it was so action-packed.

Excellent! Great chapter. Although the lack of sleep, caffeine and hospitals hit a little close to home for me.

omg so cute

This needs to be an episode scene on the show! Beautifully written. Great job!

So sweet!

They are so adorable - Tani and Junior - that is. I love how Steve is a fatherly figure to Junior. Great chapter.

I got name dropped...I must be famous now! ;)

Full-key offended that you called a 70s' Camaro - or any classic, American muscle car - a *relic*.

Quid Pro Quo: Dean. You know what I mean. :D

Loved this story. I've said this, with nearly every Five-0 story that you've done, but you have an uncanny knack for perfectly capturing the essence of each character. Well done!
Danno and Steve are the kings of carguments and bromance bickering.

Cute. Although, Duke's granddaughter is Akela, not Mali.

I like it.

Ha, very sweet. You always capture the characters perfectly.

You are utterly owning the banter of Steve and Danno. you got it down pat!

The day started off weird enough for Jar Jar Mortdecai with some lovely morning munchen. Then he heard some loud nyyyaaaaing and looked around. There were a bunch of giant weeaboos heading straight for him! He started sobbing and levitated right into the path of a fabulous man who was running in the opposite direction. The man knocked Jar Jar Mortdecai to the forest floor and the weeaboos passed them by.

Jar Jar Mortdecai introduced himself to the man who was named Qui-Gon Levi, a Jedi poser. 'Mesa Culled Jar Jar Mortdecai. Mesa Your Humble body pillow.'

They were soon joined by Qui-Gon Levi's padawan King Julien Kenobi. Jar Jar Mortdecai offered to take Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi to his home city of Toys-R-Us-Gunga.

When they arrived at Toys-R-Us-Gunga Boss Melman , with a little pursuasion, offered the trio a neon furry oc to go through the Planet Core. Jar Jar Mortdecai said 'Better transgender here than transgender In Da Core' but then thought better of it and got in the neon furry oc with Qui-Gon Levi and King Julien Kenobi.

While traveling through the Core the neon furry oc was almost obliterated by a fat-ass sea creature but that sea creature was eaten by another fatter sea creature first, prompting Qui-Gon Levi to say 'There’s always a bigger emo kid.' Jar Jar Mortdecai explained why he had been expunged from Toys-R-Us-Gunga in the first place - 'Yud-Say kissing den marrying Der Boss's Heyblibber, Den expunged .'

The three managed to make it out of the Planet Core ball pit. They then went to Hot Topic where they rescued Queen Hillary Clinton from the Anime Fan Federation. They got on Hillary Clinton's Nimbus 3000 and headed towards Planet Puberty. 'What a horrible morning' thought Jar Jar Mortdecai 'Mesa hope nothing else wonderful happens!

Those two are amazing parents-to-be. A boy couldn't be more perfect. Junior's gonna be a proud papa. Would that make their boy, Junior Junior?.:)

so, so sweet. these two are adorable.