Thanks for the chapter hope you update the story again would like to read more

Im still holding hope for this story to update.

Has the author dropped the story cause I would like to read more of it it's a good story please update it again

more please

TenTen us gonna be all over Shirou once she hears of his power.

you know what i cant wait for? unlimited blade works

Overall, I enjoyed these two chapters. :) The start was just a hair rocky, but honestly what starts aren't? Its not how the story begins, its about how it unfolds and the journey that everyone is taken on towards the end.

I'm guessing you didn't quite make it in time for the contest, but I don't think its that bad- the story I'd say is in the top 20% of fanfictions already due to the quality of the write and the coherence of the plot as well as some decent character interactions (its only chapter two, so there is only so much you can do to describe a relationship between the characters with roughly 18K words).

I'm looking forward to reading more if you do post in the future, so followed. :)

Bumping for the birth of two heroes changibg the ninja world!

I like what you wrote and thanks you for sharing this story.
In the hope of a new chapter Ill be checking this out.
If you drop this story then... Thank you for sharing up to now and I hope you will be writing again. Whether its a continuation or a completely different story.

Oh man this is really fun!

yey, this story will be updated.

too forced

Aww, this was looking to be rather adorable. I hope it picks up again instead of just dying out.

Poking in hope of an updoot

I’d love to see interactions between Itachi and Shirou. Itachi is essentially Shinobi world’s Kiritsugu, switching in ocular powers instead of origin bullets and time alters. Kudos to you for this idea, and I really do hope you continue it!

is this story dead. come on, update this story.