lol chuckling to himself hiccup smirking at his girlfriend oh i would like love to you exactly how flexible you can be shaking her head astrid smirking at her boyfriend i see that you love when i punch you

This was great but I wish there was more

Out of all your kinktober oneshots, I think this one is most due for a part 2! Thanks for writing.

This came out fine, I'm glad you didn't delete it :)

I don't see telling you otherwise about your fics as a challenge, just as a fellow person with anxiety struggles I know that nice words are always good. specially when they are well earned!

Dude, you writing anything at all is leaps and fucking bounds more than i could ever do. I think all of you people who sit and write fanfiction for free are absolutely amazing. Shit work, good work, the only person you have to please is yourself, audience be damned, fanfic is free. Personally, I like anything you write with mala, i feel like you capture her character well and i like how u throw her with other people, the end result is always a good read. Anyway, congrats on getting this out, i saw ur posts from the struggle bus on tumblr about this one. Good luck with the rest of Kinktober, 5 more stories to go! Ur doing great:D

nah...it's good

but it was quality work that was cleverly written

give yourself a bit more credit, you're a excellent writer :)