i saw that dam joke. fucking hades people love to use it dont they

Pls update

Go fuck yourself

Good start but I can't read anymore. Your paragraphs are too long. Good plot though.

Lol, of all the god!Percy fics, this is definitely the first I’ve seen where he gets ‘male beauty’ as a domain.

You made Jason the biggest douche bag possiblea power hungry womanizer. He’s also emotionally weak...

Lol. Percy is basically the most badass piece of man candy in this story. It’s hilarious how overtly sexual and wish fulfilling it is.

Oh finally! It looks like you got a beta or at least went over your grammar better by chapter 25.

Is Zoe a legacy of posiedon

hey man where is the sekel?

Question directed towards dead of write, unless you’re planning on making a sequel, how the fuck is this story complete?

I find the story very interesting so far but my biggest complaint is the grammar is rather bad. I would strongly suggest looking into one of the free grammar and spelling check sites such as . That said I am really enjoying the story, thank you for your hard work.

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I enjoyed it up to making the daughter the main character . Maybe if there was an alternate ending or the child was made immortal like it said earlier Artemis could do it would be interesting to continue reading

Wow. That’s a lot of chapters. Got like 11 notifications at 3:33 in the morning XD