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OmegaUltima chapter 2 . 7/14 Well, here's a small snack for your muse, hopefully it at least helps a little :P |
shazza085 chapter 2 . 6/8 Looool |
ChaoticInscriber chapter 2 . 5/21 Oh dear. What unholy vengeance on the world would be wreaked if he actually does introduce Tony and Kisuke and they manage to get along? Not even necessarily as buddies, but even as stubborn cranky rivals of a sort. Can you imagine the chaos they could cause messing with each other as much as everyone else? XD If Loki was himself and not A Mess, he'd probably find spectating entertaining, whether or not he chose to participate. Even as A Mess he might, if they can erase the traces tying him back to Thanos enough that he can start recovering. (Also, I want Ichigo's impression of their respective Energies to come up aloud at some point - if only to point out to Loki that while his ribbon might have a lot to it Thor's doesn't, he also has a very strong streak of what Thor's is entirely made up of, therefore spiritually, at least, he is at minimum part-Asgardian, not wholly Frost Giant no matter what anyone has said to the contrary. He might be a hybrid of some sort, but he's still legitimately Asgardian in soul, even if he is also something else.) ...If this follows the movie enough, even Ichigo will eventually end up at Stark Tower, if only because of the machine. Asgardians have alien spiritual energy that he can somewhat recognize now. But what about the Chitauri, and most important to me, JARVIS? (And the 'bots, but they might not be in NY yet or at all, so...) I adore the idea of Tony's precious creations being his kids a little more literally than most in-universe are capable of ever realizing, that they are legitimately people (though they may have needed to grow a bit before fully counting, frankly so do humans - babies and really small toddlers aren't quite individual people proper yet). In 'verses where souls are actively involved, where there are characters that can actively sense them, the idea of J and the 'bots actually having their own souls, maybe not the same as human souls but still /something/ definable as such? I love it. JARVIS is hardest to detect/id clearly, having such a vast spread of himself - would his soul proper be confined to the all-important server-banks so carefully tucked away and maintained to protect him or is his soul always everywhere he is? Would there be a distinctive layer of his spirit's energy traces in every circuit and wire he may currently be using, everywhere? Would Stark Tower have a neat coating throughout it's walls that's actually a part of J's presence to Ichigo's senses? Would it be stronger in the Lab where Tony spends so much of his time, and therefore J also pours so much dedicated attention into? Or because of the Suit(s), and his ever-presence in them? Does Tony's own soul leave such strong traces in his Lab, his haven, to obscure that unusual trace at first glance? Will he feel slightly different without the Suit and therefore with J's presence confined to his watch and phone instead of wrapped around him so completely? |
Elizabeth loines chapter 2 . 5/9 Please update |
lara5170 chapter 2 . 1/16 This is very interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more but it seems that it has already been 2 years. Hopefully it will be continued |
Allykrau chapter 2 . 12/28/2019 Ahhh love love love it so far! |
BbuingHeaven chapter 2 . 12/18/2019 more please.. i love the story |
Black Bankai chapter 2 . 10/16/2019 This is awesome |
the yokai lover rikuo chapter 2 . 8/28/2019 :) |
Prince chapter 2 . 8/28/2019 AahsbalfbajsmsbLfn I so desperately need more of this |
Haruka001 chapter 2 . 8/3/2019 It was amazing |
Haruka001 chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Ahaha this was so good |
jcampbellohten chapter 2 . 7/30/2019 I would expect the phone/mind conversation to be in Japanese, so I don't know why anyone other than Thor and maybe Loki could understand it. |
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 You appear to be using Japanese forms of address. If Ichigo started college six months ago, not enough time has passed that their relationship has progressed to the point of Ichigo calling Urahara by his given name, so it would still be "Urahara-san." Urahara uses -san for everyone except Jinta and Ururu, even his closest companions, Yoruichi and Tessai, so he would definitely still call Ichigo "Kurosaki-san," or "Ichigo-san" if he feels especially close to Ichigo by now. Judging from context I think you mean Bakudou one: Sai, not Hadou one: Shou. Tony would expect people to know who he is, so I don't think he'd introduce himself. He also wouldn't tell someone he's just met to call him Tony. This looks like it went through Google Translate, so I'll give the benefit of the doubt regarding grammar. I like the idea. Well, mostly I like the consequences of the crossover as far as Ichigo and Loki; i.e., Loki sensing Ichigo's use of spirit energy and the idea of victims' ghosts following Loki around. |
Fairondale chapter 2 . 7/20/2019 Ichigo is trying so hard to keep his identity, but it's not working...Poor guy. Just wait until Fury gets his hands on him. |