The story is fine if not a bit moody and bleak but this Shirou is a hot piping mess. Archer seems to be more Shirou-ish than Miyu-verse shirou. He seems more heroic in the manga, so i guess Miyu did something to him that made him like this. Also the level of angst in this fic is suffocating.

Thanks for ybe read

Alright, that's it
Some stuff still within bounds, but that last review, if it deserves to be called one, has crossed the line
To those who check reviews first before reading, don't listen to any troll comment. Personally speaking, this story is great. The author, WallabeJump-san put effort to write this fic very 'close' to the original source. Author make sure that characters didn't get out of bounds to the rules of type-moon itself. It has keep that consistency, which is one of the strong points in this fic.
Second, the narration. Author make the story get shown from many perspective. This fic shows that the characters has their own way of thinking. They are not merely 2d chara that was there just to fill the story. U can say that in such a way, u can feel a 'life' from this story.
In conclusion, don't listen to any trolls that badmouth this story. Try to read this fic, and judge your self whether this story worth it or not
Ps: sorry for my bad english

28 chapters of nothing happening and the same phrases being repeated over and over again in different formats. If someone is checking out the reviews before the fic: don't bother reading this shit. Seriously. It doesn't deserve your time.

Archer's too swords were unrelated to each other I thought. They just happened to look similar.

Am I the only one that noticed the "stay night" at the end? I literally fell of my couch after my brain rebooted.

good chapter.
Thank you for continuing to share this story.
Keep writing.
blessings and good health to you and your loved ones.

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update soon

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