Glad Callen and Nell were one step ahead of Shay! Good way to get her out of their hair for good! Thanks for sharing!

Nice one-shot, enjoyed reading this. Lately the fanfiction has been much better than the show (more drama); after the premiere, I feel that the following episodes haven't lived up to the hype. I know they can't be all action-packed, but there's been a lot of stand-alone eps and it almost seems like the angst the team experienced in Mexico never happened!

That was very cool!
I wish the episode had gone that sort of way - the whole Mexico saga has been disappointing in season 10 :-( Hardly any backlash from it, and over far too easily in Asesinos for Mosley. I like your interpretation of her selling the team out for real much better than what actually happened!

Great story! There are so many possibilities for the way this story could go. I have never trusted Mosley and it will be interesting to see how things will play out tonight.

If only... byebye Mosley. Will Callen really be okay?

Great one-shot and interesting interpretation. In a way I do want Mosley to sell out the team but I also want her to be faking something so she can disappear into the sunset with her son and never reappear.

That was pretty spectacular. You really want to get rid of her? I do. How do you do this with that forty-five second blurb they give us? Nicely done! Where do we go from here?

A short story with a twist ... and I loved it. This was well thought out and beautifully painted with your words. Well done!

OMG that was brilliant and all too believable. Would she really sell them out to save her own life? Yeah I think she would. Aren't you going to continue it? Regardless of what happens on the show, you could continue and say what happens to Callen (hopefully from what you said in this he'll survive) and you could describe what happens to Mosley and her reasoning. Whatever you decide, it was great and well written, just like watching the show. Well done.

Love it! This story needs a second chapter! Thanks once again for a brilliant chapter! Groetjes

Poor Callen!
Glad they got her in the end! Hopefully she's gone for good

French fan
Wonderful ! It could be con the TV show

Oh! Wow! This is so good. I hope there is more to this story.