Reviews for A Long Way from Home: The Revamp
demonboy121986 chapter 2 . 7/24
It is an ok'ish story, would be better if you took out the pointless, stupid, useless, retarded parts about vampires. I skipped most of the because of the uselessness of putting the in the story. Oooo... vamps stupidly show up, oh shit, now they pissed Naruto off in some way, oh... well now the bad ones if not all are dead. End of that stupid part.
supboyyyyy93 chapter 2 . 7/17
Can you please switch Jean as the pairing with Naruto? I was kind of hoping you wouldn't have kept, Naruto's way too young for Jean physically and mentally. The previous version of this story was way better than this current version and i really saw nothing wrong with the other story...well other than the pairing(why i think doing a poll for pairing DURING the writing of the story is such a bad idea, because despite having better bonds, A.K.A. Rachel and Noriko, with other people than a ghost who act like some old wise lady and had enough love interest as it is)what were people even thinking to have Jean as a love interest to a 16 year old Naruto, literally anyone around his age would've been better, smh. Don't even get me started on these harem fanatics who actually like that smut. (-_-')
brachiosaurus chapter 2 . 7/17
Hey Sierra, instead of having massive and many arcs, how about only some arcs (7 maybe a good number), but having them completed instead of always revamped?
Shadow chapter 2 . 6/29
loved it! Please update soon!
JokerKing7 chapter 2 . 6/20
Sigueeeeeee no abandones
Arraia chapter 2 . 6/8
Perfect and update soon please
Naruto x harem
Zero chapter 2 . 6/1
Please continue.
Zero chapter 1 . 6/1
Interesting...
BamBangBoom chapter 2 . 5/20
Very much looking forward to the Bleach story. I didn't read the original version of this story so I don't know if it was different, but the Death of Dracula (or was it Curse of the Mutants?) was never a favorite with me. Janus was boring. It also kind of killed the pace. I've never liked Hope either and her gaining Chakra, especially the way she did, was a huge turn off.
MindForgedMan chapter 2 . 5/18
I quit as soon as I saw the 'I lost Kurama!' nonsense. You'll never make actual sense with that, no thanks.
Uzushiogakure chapter 2 . 5/17
Well I am really glad you're back and that you haven't given up on this. I like chapter 1 using nice starts and it sets up the situation how Naruto got here is certainly interesting and that he actually ate a chakra fruit or at least what I'm assuming to be a chakra fruit though I thought you would have realized what he was but then again he doesn't have the best memory does he? However I am surprised the transformation is taking so long considering when Kaguya ate it the transformation was instant but that fruit was probably more powerful than this one and I'm assuming that it's because she was a Pure Otsutsuki and Naruto on the other hand is mostly human and I suppose the transformation has to deal with all that human DNA first before it can be completed. I do look forward to see what dojutsu he will develop though, will it be like Kaguya's or will it be some other variation?

And when his transformation is complete will he be just like Kaguya and become a full Otsutsuki or will he merely be close to what she became. The comparison of the chakra of Kaguya to cosmic energy or the power Cosmic is somewhat understandable after all the energy in its most powerful form can warp reality to create life and Destroy and considering the energy seems to be created from Natural Energy or I guess you could say the life force of nature altered in some way by the god tree I guess it makes some sense.

And the fact that Kurama hasn't yet contacted Naruto or anything I'm guessing that the chakra fruit is affecting him as well. Hope gaining chakra is definitely surprising though I do look forward to see how her mutant DNA will integrate the chakra as a part of her and what benefits it will give her once it's fully integrated with her.

What Naruto is going through upon finding out that they can't get sending back home is on the standard bus specially considering all he's leaving behind but if they truly have no way of sending it back which they probably don't because well it's the Multiverse and the only person that could probably send him back home have the Phoenix force and the doubt you would he seems to want him in this universe however hopefully onesies made it past the depression and got into acceptance he will try to make a life here perhaps he will grow to see come into this world as more of a gift than a curse I hope.

Well an attack of vampires are coming and well I can guess how Naruto will respond to that and hopefully not a lot of mutants get killed in this war there is not that many of them remaining after all.

I'm glad you mention the new Jonathan Hickman series I do agree I am glad that the X-Men in that series have gotten their heads out of their asses and actually are genuinely taken steps for the prosperity of Mutants and I finally had enough of stupidly kissing the ass of the humans that are trying to eradicate them or wouldn't really bat an eye if they were eradicated and are setting the mutant species up as a genuine world power.

Anyway all in all great chapter and I cannot wait for your next update.
Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 5/16
By the way, is X-23 Laura going to be with Naruto? I mean, I can't really find stories with her as a main lover for the MC.
Vendetta419 chapter 2 . 5/16
Him not bad this chapter was interesting. I don't think it will end well with Hope because this was Hope during the Generation Hope era and that series really did show she manipulating her teammates against her will. I see how the vampires will play into this because they will be the one to force Naruto into action. Right now I can picture him not trying to be involved with the mutants affairs because his only concern is getting back home which make sense why he is behaving the way he is. I can picture him getting into a lot of fights (arguments) with others because he may refused to help or get to know other because of his concerns of wanting to go home. That was interesting interaction with him and the Richard's children.
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 5/15
Good luck naruto and hope.
OllyOllyOxycontin chapter 2 . 5/15
Huh, I didn't expect to lose most of my desire to continue already. Most of this chapter was a complete and utter waste to me because I know literally zero about them(vampires?). I also didn't really care at all about Hope. I guess I set my expectations to high considering this has been rewritten like 3 times. At least you still have your Fate crossover. It's pretty good.
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