hahaha, that was adorable :)

Good grammer.

That was a cute short story.

Cute. The dialect writing is actually pretty good as well. I did though feel I was getting a snatch of something bigger though.

Aww... the awkwardness of love... I loved it!

Ooh this is so good! I love it, thank you so much for sharing this story!

Just finished watching this today, definitely can't wait for more of this to start cropping up in the next few months/year. One of the most refreshing shows in a long while. This was done quite well, if a bit fast, and the second to last sentence lapsed a little grammatically toward the end. A bit more detail would've been nice, but this certianly will stay on my radar for a while.

This is cute. Also nice way in showing Rayla's accent.

This is exactly the kind of awkward fluff I want to see XD