you should add a chapter 2 or a part 2

I was honestly expecting that he would end up kidnapping Naruto and keeping him for himself but what a great unexpected thing happen. Great job author-sama

This fanfiction is literally everything it's dark, beautiful, romantic and intriguing. it's so good I can't even describe it :)

OMG! I knew it! They were accomplice after all!
I feel sorry for Kiba though. Just when he was about to make things right and try to save Naruto...
Well, anyway, the suspense was really good~!
Thanks for sharing XD

From the start, I already had a feeling that Sasuke was behind all of this and Kiba would be the next target, I got that feeling when Sasuke caught Kiba staring at him. You know it's never a good sign when something like that happens.
But what I didn't expect that Naruto actually knows everything. I was a bit confused when Sasuke invites Naruto to his house and tells him not to tell anyone. So it was a bit contradicting. It got me question: Naruto was the victim but why would Sasuke wanted to kill him? So yeah, my conclusion is Naruto has always been there with Sasuke during all the murdering happened.
Anywho, thank you for sharing this amazing story, kudos for you! (I apologize if my grammar sucks, english is not my native language :)

firstly, HOLY FUCKING FUCK! YOURE SPECTACULAR! The ending scene with narusasu was beautiful. please please please do as the reviews suggest because I fully agree with these people! Gotta admit I was bit um... curious about the plot but I thoroughly enjoyed it. I really don't think it can get much better than that! :D -XxRayah

This is a beautiful piece, I love how the plot made all the characters feel natural , as in they don't feel OCC . I am truly glad I saw this fic

Uhmm I don't know if I like this or not.. But I feel sad that they killed Kiba...

I KNEW IT! SASUKE WAS A YANDERE. #ayanoaishi

Awesome story like really dark but freaking amazing.

This was crazy

That was really good! Nice job!

this was oddly satisfying to read. sasuke killing the bullies and reading it all from kiba’s point of view were really interesting. i loved the scene at the end with naruto and sasuke. thanks for this!

Ooohh... I love this. Those bitches deserves it and more. And kiba, well he should have mind his own business. Im pretty sure Shikamaru has an idea whats going on but he doesnt care or doesnt want to die thus he kept his mouth shut.
Im hoping you would write a sequeal with Naruto or Sasukes point of view.

yooooo that was so fucked up but so amazing