YES. YES YES YES! That was GREAT! I loved it. I feel like that that's what actually happened when they got home. It's so logical. I love it. I LOVE it and I TOTALLY agree with you and everything that happened in the fanfic. :D

Dipper will forgive Mabel no matter what; she is his beloved sister, and nothing will ever change that. You did a great job with Mabel's emotional outburst and Dipper's response. It was short, but good. A quick talk and moving on was all they needed. :)

Looking forward to more Gravity Falls fan fictions you may write!