I was with you at first, but this has just gotten to be too much. There are already so many characters, specifically potential villains, in this world that can be used and now there’s a convoluted Arys in the mix too? It’s just so over the top. The general premise is good and I hope you continue, but this is just too much for me now. Best wishes.

The Jonny-boy looks like the typical cliche idiot.
Hope the author will wisen him up at least to bearable state. I for one DO NOT enjoy reading about half-nitwit without enough braincells to think about anything else than 'HONOR!' or 'BROODING!'.

You are taking way to long to move the story along it gets to be to boring and repetitive after about ch. 10

I love this story - please update soon

Continua plisseres o son muy buenos, está historia es mejor que el final de mierda que hicieron... Continua estoy obseciónada con tu historia, estoy esperando actualizaciones... Desde Venezuela, sigue actualizado

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
sube mas capítulos por favor me has dejado en suspenso queriendo saber que va a pasar después, por favor actualiza, me ha gustado la historia hasta ahorita. :)

Thank You for This Story.

I found it incredibly dense and deep. I love the way you managed to captivate me from the first chapter all the way until now.

It is why i must ask you to not give up and continue the story.
Because, it would be such a shame to let it go to waste.

Thank you

I abslolutely love your story.
Do you plan to post the next chapters or to leave it unfinished ?

Jon has no right to be angry at Ned considering all the risk he took to himself and his family to keep him alive. Also no, Jon is not the heir to the throne. Because Rhaegar was not the king he was the prince, therefore he had no authority to reneg on his marriage to Ellia (who he had two other kids with) not to mention the Targaryen dynasty was overthrown by Robert. Jon's surname is Sand not snow that's the only difference.

Guys the latest chapters are on /works/14948843/chapters/34638821

You have plans to continue this?

Me encanta continua pliss

when will a new chapter appear ?! I already miss you!

It is like you are in love with angst, Robert should have been dead chapters ago but you just keep building up to something massive, hopefully it is not as disappoint as most are that attempt the big build up

Love your story. Dornish pillow talk rules.