OMG... oh my heart!
It was so sweet that I swear I could die of diabetes!
There are so few fanfic about this movie out there that is just so satisfying to find something so well written!
Thank you so much for doing this!
Literally, you just gave me life :3

Cute. And second part please

i loved your story can you make a second part when Wilbur is his older self? please? :)

Cute!

I'm crying...so sweet I had to research the movie after reading this please shows us part two! Thank you

Awwww This is so sweet3 I love their father-son relationship. Would you do a second part? After the movie ends and Wilbur returns

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Sleeping At Last's "Light", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story because the owners of this site have no legal permission from the songwriters.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired copyrights, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.