Reviews for A Second Chance
monkey kix ass chapter 4 . 8/8
Really interesting premise for a story. Will be interesting to see how your OC will go about creating/fixing relationships with others in the village, especially Shikaku. Anyways, enjoyed reading what you’ve written so far. Hope you get around to updating again soon.
Phanny chapter 4 . 8/3
me hoping u will update soon, been refreshing ever since last year lol
Schoolgirl chapter 4 . 7/26
I love your story so far! Please keep going if you can!
Dr. Blueneck chapter 4 . 7/23
I often come back to read this story, because it's one of the best SI fanfics I've ever read. I didn't even know reading about Shikaku's love life would interest me so much!
Aaaaah, the feels are so good. I can't wait to one day read what your imagination came up with for the rest of the story!

Thanks a lot for sharing :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/14
Can't wait to see what she does with the house. Also the innovations she'll bring, incluing recipies and the like. :3
This Shika's gonna be very different, huh? Can't wait to see it.
Great fic :)
I very much look forward to the next chapter.

Anyways here are some fic recs bc why not? :3

Chiaroscuro by boomvroomshroom ""They say the only thing to fear is fear itself. That, and a motivated Nara." Shikamaru is born with his father's intelligence and his mother's work ethic. The world is turned sideways." (The writing really improves as it goes along, and the plot and character develoments are just amzing!)

Journey Of Three Failures by Kurouga of the Ink and Snow: "Uzumaki Naruto's defeat at the hands of Hyuuga Neji changed the course of history. Now an outcast Naruto, Hinata, and Lee must flee Konoha to become stronger, and ultimately save the very village which scorned them. Strong Naruto, Hinata, and Lee. Dark!Neji, Nice!Hanabi. Epic length." (It feels like Naruto did back before the many soft reboots completely changed things, also makes Hinata a compelling and badass character. Great developments for Shika, Kiba, Sakura and Sasuke too, and of course Lee and Naruto. Best Lee ever hands down, and one of the best Naruto's out there too.)

An Invincible Summer by ShanaStoryteller on AO3 "When Naruto is five, he's gutted by a drunken civilian and presumed dead. Six months later a girl with ash pale hair and dark blue eyes enters the Academy." So many feel good scenes. But also plot and angst and my gods this fic is amaing.

Walk on the Moon by SixPerfections
"A girl reborn into the world of ninja wants to escape the cycle of violence. Power is the only thing that brings freedom in the ninja world and she will have freedom... at any cost. However breaking the bonds she forms won't be as simple as she imagines. AU SI."

Of the River and the Sea by Aleycat4eva
"They called her lazy, apathetic, and amoral. They also said she was, by turns, too smart and too dumb. She liked to think she was funny. None of them were wrong. OC/Self Insert" This one is dark though! While it has plenty of humor and fluff, it also has all of the darkest themes. Every trigger warning applies! (So well written and very compelling)

your move, instigator (draw your weapon and hold your tongue) by Laysan_albatross on AO3
"“We are still under wartime policy,” the recruiter had told her parents. He had an envelope in his hand. He sounded sorry. “She has two parents who are successful ninjas. We would be remiss to overlook her potential based upon that alone.”
The Third Shinobi War never ended. Konoha needs more soldiers, grabbing anyone who can fight, especially those who can't say no."
Heartbreaking and inspiring both, this fic is heavy on the gore (but it's not pointless, just uncomfortably realistic, to really hammer home how fucked up the situation is), and is scarily good a nailing a child's pov, all used to deliver devastating and disturbing scenes in a way that utterly hammers home just how fucked up the naruto worl is, and is just a great condemnation of child soldiers and war. It will get worse before it gets better but there is a happy ending. (One of the best fics I've ever read, though I do wish there was a sequel, lol)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13
This fic is really good! Thanks for shairng. :)
bpopa7110 chapter 4 . 7/10
Update please!
AsbelLhant chapter 4 . 6/25
If you are gonna change the Title may I suggest A Different Field of Prospect. It seeks Yoshino means 'Field of Good Prospect'. Consodering Yoshino with Shikaku wasn't good, Nagisa x Shikaku could represent the Field of Good Prospect.
AddictionProblems21 chapter 4 . 6/11
I love thisss
lovenightshade03 chapter 4 . 6/2
Oh my... This story is very interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next :3 And also can't help but admit that I hope the resentment eveyone feels for "Yoshino" ends soon... Since Nagisa really does not deserve to be treated so badly :/
Btw, will she dye her hair red or ask that people call her Nagisa to distance herself from everyone's memories of who her body used to be? It might help...
I'm very curious to see where her helationship with Shikaku will go, and also to see if she'll involve herself in the canon doing more than reaising Shikamaru, since Danzo has already shown interest in her... And if I'm not mistaken, in just a few weeks the Kuuybi attack will happen, so I guess we'll have to wait and see ;)
Ps, love Nagisa's friendship with Nono! I hope she doesn't end up like in the canon...
HarunoWolf17 chapter 4 . 6/2
Hey miss author! This story is really AWESOME! I was wondering when are gonna release the next chapter for this?

It's really awesome! I can really see this happening even though some things didn't add up like Nagisa/Yoshino not remembering this and that but I LOVE Nagisa! She's the perfect mother instead of that FUCKING BITCH YOSHINO! Sorry but I never EVER really like Yoshino ~yuck!~ Shikaku could have done better!

Still, please tell this is not gonna be one of those good yet abandoned stories please! So please please pleasr PLEASE PPPLLLLLEEEEEAAASSSEEEEE UPDATE IT!
N2 chapter 4 . 5/29
I love your work so please continue the great work.
N2 chapter 4 . 5/29
I think you should set up a patreon for those fans that are able to support you such as for a dollars giving them a few days early access to chapters.
TDI-Ryro-Eclares chapter 4 . 5/19
Please update again soon!
:)
Guest chapter 4 . 4/24
I really like this story and it's the only one i have found in which the ofc gets reincarnated as Yoshino and i like it
So keep going i'm looking forward to it and am checking every day if there is a new chapter
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