please update

Interesting, please update

What a kind and comprehensible father Harry has gained! Like, he didn't doubt for a moment, nor he excused himself to ponder on how his only child who he thought was little has suddenly revealed himself to be older than him and favoured by the Stranger. I realise this was a great thing for Harry to have- a father that will approve and accompany him on his way to kill one of the worst creatures legends have described. But if this was cannon Westeros, the father would have at least, felt cheated and wondered whether his son's birth had been the reason his wife died. And later on, would found himself lost at how to interact with his son, which would also create a rift between him and Harry. I would have loved if instead of keeping all his memories, he had regained them one at a time for every year he gained. His purpose in this life could have been revealed early on but without Harry being so independent so soon. Ja'quen would have been his closer confident and messenger between him and his own Lord. That way, the rift between Harry and his father would not have been created that sudden. But in any case, it was a nice plot to read.

no only chapter 1 come on clifhanger of doom story teller need more lol

Hmmm. This has promise. Hopefully, the plot does not get derailed by a love interest. No chapters upon chapters of Harry mooning and panting over some twit. If you must have a pairing then whoever that will be should have a pragmatic and useful personality and not infected by the usual YA needless angst syndrome. That can be so dull. Let us have more plot than cringey romance. If you must then make it so the romance is not cheesy or angst-ridden where there should be no problems at all.

Continue and update Harry after his father become lord meet with arya stark and they fall in love (after they together defead night mind they Marry and have family probaly dead as thank make from them ethernal pair to reborn into other world and make quests together and Marry and rise family over again).Harry change westrons make peace unite seven kingdoms and make progress to people have better lives and better hygiene and sanitary (remove smell from cities and villages).he share his magic with arya that with little help from dead make arya build her len magic Harry arya make her mother stop bully her because Harry father as lord with rising Power and many money tell her parents his som prefer and love strong mind independent girls who know fight and protect theyselves from atack.

Interesting beginning, I shall follow to see how it goes.

This is so wonderful, I like the fact that Harry was honest, many Mod stories, while still good, seem to focus on him never telling his family or getting close to them which doesn't seem practical. Also, congrats on your first story, it's really well written and I hope you enjoy it enough to continue!

Please please update

Interesting start. Well, I think this could be a long story with a lot of adventure. Perhaps, after beating the King of Winter, Harry could try to conquer Essos, and become the King of that continent.

I suggest you write Harry's pairing with a woman different from the usual cliches. Some women who would make a good pair with Harry: Taena of Myr, Talisa Maegyr, Bellegere Otherys, Merling Queen, Daughter of the Dusk, Quaithe, Korra, known as Lady Korra and Korra the Cruel, is a female pirate on Dagger Lake.

I have All the free games atm, Warframe seems to be the most fleshed out MP game. Considering getting the digital BF4 off the US PSN store (I have a US acct) but unsure if its worth it.

33 y.o btw, in case it matters (I prefer not to play with youngsters myself most times)

Cool Story! I've never read a born in free city fic.

I'm looking forward to what happens here.

I can just see Cersei negotiating, and dropping that line...

"When you play the Game of Thrones, you either win or die" Cersei said smugly. The Braavosi only smiled deeper.

"You will find, Ms. Lannister, that Braavosi don't play games." His grin turned feral. "But we have no winning them all the same."

Cersei looked outside, and saw the army and navy that the little[not so little now!] Sealord had gathered, and was shocked.

500,000 men, and a fleet of over 1,000 ships.

Interesting

A very cool idea for a fic - so often Harry is reborn as a Westeros in these kind of stories. Looking forward to seeing where you take this! :D