I may have one or two you could do at a later date.

I have to say that this has been your finest chapter so far. Though he's far from a saint, Jin still has some measure of good in his heart though his intentions in Tekken 6 say otherwise. I do hope he can finally put all of this behind him so he can have some sort of a normal life, whatever that may be. The family dysfunction within the Mishimas is beyond comprehension. I'm surprised it's gone on this long. But Tekken 7's conclusion may have offered a glimpse into the final stages of this conflict. I gave you a revised version of your chapter for edits. Another great effort from you here.

I had a feeling these two had a very contentious history together but info showing here further confirms that. Ayane and Kasumi have been a staple of Dead or Alive for a while now and I don't figure that will change anytime soon. Nice work.

I figured I make this episode with both Ravens. When I first saw him in Tekken 5, I thought "What's Wesley Snipes doing in the game?" Up next, Kasumi and Ayane of Dead or Alive.

This is one of the more interesting feuds due to the lack of history for both sides. And I was very concerned for Raven as few would be able to survive an explosion in the air like that from Devil Jin. I hope he is still alive. Then again, his boss is more than willing to pick up the slack in his absence, whether or not Raven lives is another story. And yeah, I like those two together, which is why I have some future stories in mind for Raven/Master Raven.

Now that you mentioned it, they do have some close similarities to Ryu and Ken. I actually did not notice it then. Nice work with these two.

The chapter I've been waiting for. We both agree this rivalry lacks the attention it deserves due to MK putting the spotlight on Scorpion/Sub-Zero; Kitana/Mileena; so on and and so forth. I also wish they would expand more on these two as it would do wonders for their development. Which is why I write most of my Mortal Kombat stories with these two going at one another's throats. Errors I found are listed below.

A glass obr: Orb.
baraka and his soldiers: Baraka needs to be capitalized.
Mistaking Tanya Tanya to be a rival male: Eliminate the extra Tanya.

I sincerely hope Jade & Tanya are able to finish their rivalry once and for all.

Very annoying cat fight. It's disappointing Tekken failed so miserably with their character development.

The quest for vengeance can be a lonely and grueling task to take on by oneself. It appears Maxi is no exception to this rule as Astaroth destroyed damn near everything close to him.

Very impressive first chapter. Ivy Valentine's story is filled with sorrow, betrayal, and lunacy with Cervantes the culprit behind it all. Her fortitude stands firm to this day, but she won't rest until Soul Edge is obliterated once and for all. One has to wonder if Ivy's suffering will ever end.

A great start here.

This may be one of your more interesting tales to date. Love to see where this will go and which feuds you'll pick for this story.