Reviews for Sonic's Story
Avril the Glitch chapter 5 . 6/22
Socute️
MapleLover chapter 10 . 3/28
That was absolutely amazing! I could feel the emotional pain through the character! You are an amazing author, I hope you know that. :)
ConnorRK800yaoi chapter 10 . 9/24/2019
Oh my god I LOVE YOU3
Gokuu the Carrot chapter 10 . 8/28/2019
I wonder... What Manic and Sonia are doing now...
MadameMirage77 chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
Things are about to get very interesting.
I feel absolutely no sympathy towards Aleena whatsoever! She deserves what's coming to her. That horrid bitch doesn't deserve to be called a mother.

Although I wonder what Shadow and Sonic's friends would do to his father, Manic & Sonia? Is Sonic's father still even alive at this point? Ooh things are about to escalate very soon.

P.S. Does Sonic see Vanilla as his mother figure?

*Gets popcorn, drinks and snacks ready for author and other readers; as well as sneaks in a few weapons like a metal baseball bat in* We need something to pummel Aleena for what she's done; hints the bat *holds said bat up*
Gokuu the Carrot chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH?!
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What you you have planned, Author-person? XD
Tolkam chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
I feel like Chapter 9.5 is a more appropriate name. Now I just have to wonder what you're plotting...
GuardianDragon98 chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
Ooh, the suspense!

I imagine Sonic confronting his mother in jail with Shadow and the others right behind him. While all of his friends are screaming at Aleena, threatening her for being so cruel towards her own son, Sonic is just standing there with a blank, emotionless, face. He doesn't want Aleena to get killed by his friends, but he does want her to feel the fear he once felt long ago. He lets his friends carry on, before calmly raising a hand to signal them to stop. Then he walks over to his mother in her cell, holds Shadow's hand then says the lines in this chapter.

And all the while, Shadow is glaring with all the fire and fury of hell at Aleena, the woman who doesn't deserve to be called the mother of the hedgehog he loves.

What do you think?
Kurokodairu - SNSF chapter 10 . 4/16/2019
:3 YES IT'S NOT OVER! OMG I JUST WANT THAT DEVIL WOMAN TO BE HAND-BEATEN BY SONIC! (Oh God I'm so brutal :T )
Tolkam chapter 9 . 3/7/2019
This story makes my blood boil with rage. 11/10 abuse overload.
Is the story over now? It seemed somewhat...resolved at the end of the chapter.
MadameMirage77 chapter 9 . 3/6/2019
I am really enjoying this story. I'm just sorry that I didn't find it sooner or post a review for it.

Personally, I think Shadow should pay a "visit" to Aleena in jail, and it won't be pleasant - for her! And IF Sonic's brother and sister somehow find him, and come to apologize (or whatever), I can imagine Sonic being highly suspicious and downright hateful towards Manic and Sonia due to their actions. I don't think they deserve to be forgiven so easily. They should EARN Sonic's forgiveness, trust and love after all the hell his family had put him through!

Especially since Sonic's not that scared little hedgehog anymore. That and he has a very loyal, protective boyfriend and equally loyal and protective friends too.

Are you going to bring in Sonia and Manic to try to find Sonic or something?

P.S. Sorry if I am resentful towards Aleena (especially that bitch), Sonic's father and his siblings. But you, my friend, have done a good job to make them the most hated characters in this story. Not even Eggman has been that bad.

I found it adorable that Sonic instantly cuddled against Shadow's chest fur at the end of the chapter. Must be the world's softest pillow?
GuardianDragon98 chapter 9 . 3/6/2019
Not gonna lie... I teared up reading this :'(
Kurokodairu - SNSF chapter 9 . 3/6/2019
DOWN WITH THAN "WOMAN" ! SHR MUST DIE! DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!
Tolkam chapter 8 . 3/6/2019
This story still continues to break my heart.
Gokuu the Carrot chapter 8 . 3/5/2019
We should throw her into the ocean... Near the sharks... Then give her a "good luck!" And leave
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