This is really good! I love how Aniston is bitter but human! I hope you update soon!

I honestly wasn't sure if I wanted to read this because I despise Bryce as well as Montgomery (for obvious reasons), but I'm also intrigued by your plot and I watched the videos you posted on youtube and they were amazing. I'm glad I gave this a shot because your writing is pretty great.
Aniston seems like a very flawed and difficult person, but I'm sure there are reasons for that. I bet there'll be a lot of angst involved considering she's dating Bryce and Montgomery is her brother (my condolences to her, lol).
I'm excited for whatever comes next.

I'm intrigued, the character itself seems to be evil but it just seems, I believe it is not as cold as it seems, it must have its motives to be so, waiting for the next chapter.