Well never mind was excited I honestly hate when mc tells kage about hes situation it's stupid imo like hate how person is like oh it's a good idea no it's not it really isn't

Do not reveal it even to the hokage

this is lit, really do hope you continue I see high potential for this fic

If 5k then try to keep a steady schedule on updates. We know quite a few authors that put out ridiculous sized chapters once a month. It works for them but do what works for you. We will be here until you either finish or give up on it. Even if we do not speak.

if I forget wich story yours is I'm not so likely to read since I need to reread to catch up and get back into it. weapon kiba sounds cool.

the sword sheathing bit was a bit weird. the pommel is at the bottom of the handle, so if that is poking over his left shoulder at an angle and he is right handed he has to reach across his body in a really weird angle. maybe a mistake? I like him getting to know Naruto.

maybe, if possible, have like a case files extra at the end of the chapter. kinda like journal entries or mission reports like ibiki post interrogation report part one subject is yada yada. get it? or his mom's journal or the Hokage's or even narutos just to get a bit more filler and insight. might also help with writing.

I liked the chapter I don't mind shorter chapters as long as I get regular uploads. like

Really like how its going so far, if Kiba's going a weapons route then maybe he should talk/learn from Tenten about what she knows or even her father. Keep up the good work

nice chapter, the length is fine, so keep up the good work and can't wait for more!

awesome :)

Work for whatever length is comfortable and works for you.

Anyways, thanks for the newest chapter! It's very interesting to see where you'll take this. One of the only things I'm kind of worried about is that he hasn't explicitly told them about Kabuto yet- though that may have been included in what all he was talking about.

I'm really looking forward to more!

5k works or even 4K as long as you bring the goods we’ll read.

nice chapter thx for writing it
nice seeing him teaching naruto some stuff
will be fun to see if the old man deals with danzo
as for chapter length is good its not to long or to short 5-6k is nice
looking forward to the talk with kiba older sister and the teasing that she is now younger and should listen to her wise older brother

nice...

This is a good intro, but other than the telling the hokage the future nothing new.

Warning signs
Using a sword is a bad omen, also skill lists for some reason. Not sure how chakra/jutsu will work with such low numbers. Describing mc clothes also. Some big blocks of text that I skipped

Watching and waiting for more.

lame

just another tell people shit type of thing.