Compared to the other two big Warhammer/Warcraft crossovers Pipers is probably biased to warhammer and deadliest fan to warcraft, but this takes bias and jumps off the deep end.
I can’t help but think this fic is somehow both an attempt to troll Warcraft and an ironic ( conscious?) self troll. I mean you said you hate sues in your bio, but Ragnar pretty clearly comes off as one even though he would hardly be special by the standards of the setting. At times you vastly underestimate, mischaracterize or straw man warcraft so hard that I seriously think you have a grudge against the setting and this writing is cathartic for you.

The actual writing style is good, but spite fics are bad form imo

Yeah.. This fic has some serious characterization problems. You're strawmanning the Night Elves severely here, they do have some arrogance about them but not at all to this extent and not even close to the level that the Asur or Asrai are known for displaying. They're simply out of character here. You depict them as seeing humans as lesser, yet they do everything they can to help the Gilneans and even give them refuge in their own home. And this is all while the Cataclysm wrecked Darkshore, the Horde cutting down Azshara and Ashenvale and Fandral's betrayal.

What the hell is the logic behind portraying Elune as haughty and arrogant? There is ZERO proof of this in the actual lore and plenty of proof to suggest the contrary, ie. she actually is benevolent, not only to Night Elves but to other races as well.

Night Elves would also NEVER denigrate other peoples' religion, as long as your religion isn't obviously evil, no race in the Alliance would have a problem with it, they have been shown to be quite respectful when it comes to spiritual beliefs.

Warcraft's elves are also more technologically advanced than most people think. The old Kaldorei Empire was very sophisticated, its architecture surpassed even that of the Black Empire and the humans of Azeroth have yet to build anything to such a scale. The Quel'dorei have their automated guardians, even Dalaran reached its heights thanks to cooperation between human and high elf mages. Then there is the Nightborne, Suramar is the largest city we've seen to date and if you do the quests in Zandalar, we see them working with the reliquary using automated drones with rudimentary AI to do archeology work.

Say what you will about the Light and the Alliance's idealism, but that idealism is precisely the reason Azeroth isn't nearly as much of a shithole as the old world is. It is the reason Azeroth survived it's own End Times and TWTW didn't. That idealism is why the Alliance is capable of working together and the races of the Old World fail to do so until it is too late.

I have qualms on demons on WoW are weaker than Warhammer's. But its Tzeentch so he could just be lying like as usual. I see warhammer humans as weaker since they're 'human' and Azeroth humans are descended from Vrykul.

I would like the fanfiction but there are a few problems:

is a Gary Stu. He can use the power of Ulric WAY TOO MUCH and is stupidly powerfull! The blessings and miracle of Warhammer Gods is more of a 0.5% succses thing, not something that can even be used every day. You seemingly alsow forgot that there are no Warp Gates on Azeroth or Old One machines, Ulric basically can't exist and help Ragnar in any shape and form. And even if he could help by gaining enuff followers, that is just impossible. Most memmbers of the Alliance (don't even bother with the Horde) worshiping the Light, a force that workes 90% of the time just better than any religion of the Warhammer World, making the Cult of Ulric just look like a bunch of incompetend mages or ineffektive shamans. Thus, Ulric would never have enuff followers to do anything.

Elves are WAY too arrogant. They have a bit of it, but they don't thing that everyone sucks but them. They complain sometimes about their allies, but not as much and as hard like in this story. Even Elune is just turned into an anoying child for no reason. We don't know her personality 100% in the Lore, but what we do know it that she is a LOT less of a douchbag than here (alsow, she seems to have a thing for cleaning corruption).

One last thing: WoW ogers a a lot more dangerus than WH ogers, because they can grow far more powerfull. The WoW Ogers buildet and actuall Empire (Gorian Empire) with powerfull mages at the top of it and where greate sailors (Oger Juggernauts). Even Gul'dan wanted more Oger Mages for the Horde and found a way to make more of them. The WH orgers are quite the same there with strength and mass, but their magic is a lot less effective and the only ,,Empire" they had was and ,,Empire" just in name, not because it was an actuall Empire. They alsow suffer from an endless hunger. Hell, the Gorina Empire fell because they pissed of the Elements themself in their war with the Orcs. The Warhammer Oger Empire fell because Grimgor killed the ruler of it. The ones on Azeroth just aren't as smart or powerfull because they wheren't very long there and the Gorian Empire fell ages ago.

well

Looking forward to part two! Hope to see your book advertised here on !

Great chapter mate, really for enjoyed keep the fantastic work.

For Ulric!

Nice chapter. Thanks, good to see you continue this good work

Glad to see more of this, I'm really looking forward to seeing what your already big butterflys will cause in the future, just Liam being alive will no doubt make things interesting, nevermind what the effect Ulric's presence both with Ragnar and the Worgens will have on the future. I can envision a few Worgen Templars in the future.
Keep up the great work can't wait for more! :D

The culture shock when they get to Darnassus should be interesting. The night Elves are VERY different from the Asur and far less arrogant (to be fair that's not exactly difficult). Although I'm not sure what I think of the idea of old world dwarf craftsmanship being beyond azerothion dwarf craftsmanship. Still your story your rules and aside from a few minor quibbles I think this is great.

this got me pumped.

Can you post a short update chapter when you publish the 2nd part? So followers can get the notifcation.

Please continue

Nice story.

This story deserves a lot more recognition imo (and is still maintained, so I shall post my first review on this site.
I read a ton of stories and your writing style is excellent. The absence of errors is also very pleasing. It is only bc of the high quality of writing, that I will mention that your MC's favourite phrase 'Ulric Wölfe sind gekommen' is not entirely correct, it has to be 'Ulrics Wölfe' ('wolves of Ulric', for that the 's' at the end of 'Ulric' is important).
I would also like to ask if Sylvanas can be saved, her hatred against the living redirected against the true enemy after her schemes against Ragnar fail. It would make sense (imo) for her to recognize the direct involvement of a new god and the opportunities that come with getting on the good side of Ulric's champion. She is arrogant but not stupid...