I confess your story brought tears to my eyes. It was beautiful, touching and incredibly heartbreaking. Wonderfully done. You managed to give Charlie's story a lot of sense: why he didn't marry in the end. I loved your story deeply.

This was such a good read. The way you hopped between present and past flowed well and it truly got me to feel... feelings lol

Well done, a great read!

This is really good and the first under the Jacob's sibling tag so congrats!

Rather impressive story. A bit maudlin, but I think that was what you were going for, and hit the nail square on the head. Nice Work.