It was so good, I never cried this much in months xD
Wish Enji and Kaigo was alive to see the child

And thus the story is concluded.

Sorry it took me so long to read this final chapter friend. You did a REALLY good job with it. I was expecting Toya to be killed, but I'm kinda glad he was thrown into prison instead. Everything about this ending is very bitter sweet. Honestly, the most bitter parts about it are Hawks death, and Shoto's ban from ever being a hero (although I guess he should just be lucky he isn't going to prison).

Great work. I can't wait to read your future stories.

AAAAAND everyone's dead lol

Or maybe just severely injured? I wonder who'll survive this attack. Is Dabi gonna live, or no?

I don't like where this is going...I have a bad feeling that something really bad is gonna happen to either Hawks or Fuyumi. These sort of things never end well after all.

Love where you've taken the story. I'm surprised how much you've managed to do with the Todoroki family.

That ending! Oh my! How much emotion is running through fuyumi’s head! That poor girl! Just save her Hawks!

Lovely job!

Oh boy...is Fuyumi pregnant with Hawk's child?

It's interesting seeing Shoto's change here. I wonder if he'll slowly but surely be molded into a villain, or will he always be hesitant? Guess I'll just have to wait and see!

Love your story as always. Keep at it girl!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY IT'S OUT!

The structure of this story is very unique. Having one scene where Enji is being an uncaring ass to Toya and Rei, and the next scene have some soft fluff between Enji and Rei is a bold choice. I really like the style and pacing.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

And thus the assassination planning begins. I see now why you decided to bring Hawks into the story. Is he gonna be the key to stopping Shoto? And how will his secret (and rather intimate) connection to the Todoroki's influence things? I can't wait to find out!

WHY HAVEN'T I BEEN KEEPING UP WITH THIS HOLY CRAP

This is such a good idea! Fuyumi and Hawks. It's so tragic, his life as a double agent getting in the way. Really wasn't expecting this whole thing from this story, but I'm loving it so far!

Also, I wanted to scream and cry at the end. HE DOES LOVE YOU! IT'S JUST NOT THAT EASY!

Great work. I'll read the next one tomorrow.

Ah! This is so intense! I love your explanation for Dabi's burns! And that panic attack by rei! Great job!

You know, all things considered, I don't really blame Dabi for what he's doing. But Shoto? It feels like this turn is happening a LITTLE bit suddenly. That gives me a feeling it won't last for very long. Todoroki is basically playing the Sasuke role right now, and I'm fine with that XD

The flashbacks are so freaking sad man, but exactly what I would picture. Rei has been tormented beyond belief.

Great chapter Star. You're doing really good with such heavy and dramatic material.

Omg! So much just happened. That poor baby. Shoto is being manipulated while he is concussed (clearly). But my heart totally shattered when Toya asked if Shoto was the masterpiece. The sad tail of the Todoroki family is so insane. This family is like if the Kardashians mixed with the Days of Our Lives.

That ice wall! Shoto's mom had to be powerful for him to get such insane power. Man... that marriage proposal. That was intense!

Yikes, this is gonna be pretty dark. I can already tell.

I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see what Dabi wants with Shoto.

Quick question. Do we know much about Dabi's power yet outside of the blue flame? Like, do we know it hurts him when he uses it? Is that canon?

How intriguing! You did a good job with this.

So this means Dabi is without a doubt going to be involved somehow with the Todoroki family. I can't wait to see where you take it.

Good job! I'll be waiting for chapter 2