Honestly it is too bad that you did not focus more on the relationship between Naruto and Ino and how Ino deals with her family being gone with Naruto’s help (which is what made me check out this story in the first place) and instead turned Naruto into an edgy teen with loads of emotional problems. It’s too bad such a great idea seems to be wasted but best of luck in the future.

Still love this. Can’t say Naruto being fox summoner isn’t over done but I’m guilty of that as well so I can’t really speak on that lol. Hope to see more soon

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Minato wasn’t an ANBU. I just realized you said that twice now. He got his title the “yellow flash” when he was a jonin not when he was an ANBU.

Right. Not a bad concept but you’re making one of the basic beginner mistakes. You need to start a new paragraph every time you change speakers otherwise scenes just become confusing messes. Best of luck.

not bird hair its duckbutt

This story has a surprisingly good plot line, however Narutos character isn’t written very well. In my opinion isolating him was a bad choice, he is much more OC the way you write him. I also think that while Naruto being OP is kind of fun, more explanation is needed in terms of his powers and abilities.

brilliant

sick

Nice chapters!

Not for me. Unless people want an edgy bipolar op Naruto this isn't for them either. You should've built more on Naruto and Ino's relationship instead of turning her into a pathetic d damsel in distress.

I mean, his parents show up and tell him to value his friends and stick by then. So of course he has to do the opposite.

Nothing it's explained in this story. It's just random emo thoughts from Naruto before he beats everyone.

Why was her time so short? Does that mean she'll appear again later? I mean, she's there to help Naruto when he tries to fight the kyuubi. She should have much more chakra than a two minute chat's worth.

An interesting start. I don’t like how things went so smoothly between Naruto and The fox though. Seems unrealistic for what’s been going on in Naruto's life.

Great story and I will continue reading it when updates come but you meany you killed kurama we love the fuzzy

I enjoy your story but it seems like these most recent chapters are a little fast paced and not as well written as previous ones. Like not much of a build up or anything.
And you keep writing Hokage instead of Kazekage for Suna.