Nice. Keep up the good work

Ooh dear...the Forest of Death is next eh? Talk about future rigorous training! *shudders*

Update again soon!

Hey! Looks like Naruto and Sasuke are starting to become good friends now! That’s good to see.

Ooh! Very interesting! May I make a suggestion for Naruto’s harem? I suggest adding Shizuka maybe if possible!

Interesting start!

Hmm. It's either few short sentences of narration or dialogs. Like, the second segment, there is nothing but dialogs. That is not a way to write a story.

Tenzo got a name Yamato only in Shippuuden when he was relieved from his ANBU duties to help train Naruto. Before that, he was Tenzo, not Yamato.

The whole idea for this fic is... stupid. Well, maybe not the idea on itself, but its execution. Your writing is too simplified, the characters portrayed like idiots while Naruto is seemingly the only smart one. I get it, Naruto pretending to be an idiot when he really isn't, but this seems a bit too much.

Honestly, I just wanted to roll my eyes the entire time I read this chapter. Not going to continue further, so take my review as you will.

What an original idea that's never, ever, been done before! A fucking MASKKKKKKK! HOLY SHIT SUCH ORIGINALITY AND TOTALLY NOT THE MOST OVER USED PILE OF SHIT IN THIS ENTIRE FUCKING FANDOM! God you're so talented and intelligent for using the most asinine and fucking brain dead plot device there ever fucking was! !Congratulations. You're the worst "author" on this site.

great chapter I enjoyed it

I very much like seeing the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke, especially when they’re good friends. I like this dynamic you have going on, despite it being a little rushed (pledging loyalty after saving fangirls) it still is at the start of the relationship. Great job and update soon!

Love it

great story so far looking forward to reading more please update and complete and as for Naruto's Harem I suggest the following

Samui- Great training partner and Naruto could help her have fun while still being serious about being a ninja

Yugito- she has the same fate as Naruto which would makes it much easier for them to connect

Ino-there is just something about these 2 together that just works Naruto can break her out of her fangirl attitude if she has one

Tayuya- She deserves a better life then serving her master in Oto and I firmly believe Naruto is the only one who can give her a better life and redeem her and seeing them together they really look like a young Minato and Kushina type pairing Tayuya even has the same attitude as Kushina

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You know... this was way way too short. But look at me... I'm talking... XD. If you don't know, my first 2 chapters you didn't even need to scroll down!

that was good keep the chapters coming

good story hope you continued