never mess with the puppet

Hah, he’s under the bed. So classic.
This was great, was enjoyable to read.

Very nice, even if it's a bit darker than what you usually write. Was that Chrissy or just some random girl?

Aww I loved the ending it was sooo sweet that the Puppet decided to stay with her to keep her safe! Was this supposed to take place after FNAF 6? Cause that would explain y the Puppet was in Lefty and y it was so beat up. I really liked this and would totally be interested in a sequel if u made one!

Well, that was weird. Awesome writing, great grammar. I like that Puppet protected her. But I would ask if you could put a warning in the summery? Just for people who are triggered because of WHAT the kids was running from.
I really like the whole smiley thing. It really does seem like something a kid would call the Puppet for sure.
The whole genre was so well picked, and written. I was scared for the girl even! I'm glad the kids ok though. Parents should keep a better eye on her.
I do wonder what will happened to his soul there, in the deserted fazbears.

I teared up. mari saves the girl and now has a home with her. I really like this story, Maris relationship to Christy is best described like an adoptive father or godfather as Mike puts it. I love this relationship so much it's too adorable

I oddly wouldn't mind if this got continued like the other five nights at Freddy's stories you make. I find it refreshing compared to Mike and Marionette again.

anyway, great writing here and am glad to see your not tired of this story idea. Then again, from what you said at the end of "Can't go home again" it's understandable why you have become attached to it.

Thanks for the story.

i like this storie, im never a big fan of one shots becourse they usaly not done were well but this is top A stuff in my apoinion good start. good twist and lets all not forget wee all love the puppet and hopped he would save the girl so good job keep up the amazing work

*SOBS* THAT ENDING WAS SO SWEET

that's Chrissy isn't it? I'm p sure it's her

I'm glad the uncle got oofed, he deserved it, I shudder to think about what he was going to do with her

so...freddy's has been burned down, but Mari survived while presumably camping inside of Lefty, aight

honestly that "uncle" gave me the the heebie jeebies something awful, I'm glad he's dead

she calls him smiley, aaaaaa that's so cute, I love this story so much

Please tell me this isn't a one shot. This was amazing.

This is a masterpiece! The writing, the story, it's amazing!

Nobody messes with Mari's and lives to tell. Marionette is, as always, the MVP! Or should we say, Mr. Smiley (•)

Oooooo there are so many things I want to just... I am so glad that man is DEAD! GO MARI, POOR LITTLE GIEL EIFNDKEFNKDNDBJGJD I was on the edge of my seat and I wanted to kill that guy, it was Uch! He is nasty!
Great story!

You know having a friendly monster as the puppet would be kinda inconvenient for me since my bed doesn’t have any room under it,so Mari would probably wouldn’t have any where to stay lol