I enjoyed this immensely and almost wish the manga would turn out the same way, but there are too many other characters that I would like to see live happily as well xD Thank you for sharing this!

so good

Good story! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE [...]!

Grrrr

Aww

T-T

I liked your storie :D It was interesting ant it was nice to see that world in a other point of view. Thanks to make us read your good works and good luck in your futures writing!

Glad that everything is over for Allen but sad coz the story is complete.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic

loved it cant wait for the next chapter of the story. keep doing what you love to do and enjoy it with all your heart and soul

Oh poor Allen. No matter what name he goes by, to Mana he will always be his son and always love him. I glad all those monsters are dead. Now they just gotta help the children... And help Alma since his mind literally broke, I think Road could probably help him most since she can see into people's hearts and minds. She's the best qualified to help him and to mend him. Those poor Kids have been put through hell, and a literal hell on earth. I'm just glad Mana has his little son with him again. He'll never be letting him go... Ever.

I would love to read what comes next!

I can't wait for more~

Oh my! I’m tearing up right now.

I'm not crying, I swear I'm not crying- SHOOTI'MCRYING.

You: "... character death, but no one I like."

[please try to imagine this being said in a monotonous tone]
Me: "Oh my God. Somebody's going to die. Who is it going to be? I hope it's not somebody I care about. Oh, the suspense is killing meeeeeeee" xP

*Later, after Leverrier dies*

[still same monotone]
Me: "Oh dear, it was Not-Hitler? I never would have seen that coming. I'm so surprised, I feel like my head is about to exploooooode" xP

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

And yaaaaaay! Komui is here! I was wondering how you'd go about reuniting him with Leenalee. This seems like a pretty interesting approach! :D