I love this story! I love how Jane is going to use the info that Loki gave her unknowingly and escape with Darcy! That'll surprise him! Earth is a huge place, and it would be very hard for him to find her. He said so himself that he wasn't able to find all the Avengers but they would be dead once he did.

Wow. Several very intense chapters in a row.

Now Loki must be thinking how good it was to take Darcy along Jane : Darcy passes as a concubine when in fact she is a hostage. Still, Loki must be comploting, right?
Poor Jane, she is quite aware she may surrender to Loki after enough time spent with him.

Now Loki must be thinking how good it was to take Darcy along Jane : Darcy passes as a concubine when in fact she is a hostage. Still, Loki must be comploting, right?
Poor Jane, she is quite aware she may surrender to Loki after enough time spent with him.

Phew, dark alright! But loving all their interactions, you write them so well!

Jane has power that she's not using. If Loki wants a storyteller and she serves as that, she'll be able to demand more freedom, better treatment, etc. Why would she want that? Because hope springs eternal. If she can survive her imprisonment, there's a small chance that Real Life may be possible afterward.

The up side to Dark Loki may be that things can only get better.

There's no more to binge. But I NEEEEEED more. This is probably one of the best stories I've read. Let alone fanfiction. I loooove your style. Can't wait until next chapter!

DUN DUN DUUUUUN. I think she'd hella right. OR, or its Selvig. Maybe he found her backup and put in the notes before he was killed? I'm still hurting on that, by the way.

Awh Janie. That was an overwhelming amount of feels. She's tough as nails to have lasted as long as she did. Now excuse me, I gotta go cry a lil.

That was a CHAPTER. Oml. Maaaaan. You know how to work those dark themes.

The vivid descriptions are just PERFECT. It's so graphic and powerful. Oof. I love it all.

Oof. This chapter is just. OOOF
Complete and utter OOOOF.

Hela is such a unhinged BAMF. I really enjoy the unpredictable nature of Loki as you write it, he's such a contrast to Hela, who's just conversely CRUEL.

Good God. The FEELS. I love your sense of stature with the story, everything is so grand scale and iron. It's a really well developed atmosphere that I look forward to seeing how it develops on Asgard.

Jane is one tough woman, for sure. I absolutely LOVE this dystopian setting and can't wait to see where the story goes next!

Also. Selvig. Selvig no. :(