| Reviews for The Frozen Throne |
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   Lycaon1096 chapter 5 . 5/10 Please update this STORY |
| bloodline 69 chapter 5 . 3/10 more chapters please good story |
| Tony McNucklz chapter 5 . 12/19/2019 this story is a far cry in quality from your other jackson stories in quality. for one thing zoe has no strong claim as lady of winterfell. her father may have been the eldest brother, but the lordship passes through the male line before the female line. Robb and his 2 brothers are ahead of zoe in the line of succession. her being the quintessential violent mary sue that frightens all the men makes her a boring reboot of a thousand other supposedly flawless gorgeous man-eaters that show up in stories, so she's more a parody character then something actually relatable and entertaining. her character badly needs a rewrite. percy at least has recognizable flaws. this story has potential, but not while you got the ball-busting mary sue dragging down the story. make her something real, that fits into the constraints of the asoiaf society, and have the westerosi mentality actually push back on her behavior and this might become a workable story. Note: Captain America is boring hecause he is a one-dimensional character. Same with Wonder woman. add depth and nuance to your zoe, and your story will come together. |
| NoGoogleFuplease chapter 5 . 10/31/2019 Came here after you mentioned this story in your other PJ/ASOIAF cross. Can't say I like this one all that much. An evil or indifferent protagonist is fine, but so far Percy has been without agency, which is the thing that irritates me about this. It's obvious that he was gonna get his agency back pretty soon but until that happens this story can't hold my intrest. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2019 Please update... Don't abandon the story please, it's a great story and I can't wait for more |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/17/2019 This was great PLEASE! Continue it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2019 Awesome |
| HockeyBear chapter 5 . 7/3/2019 The way you write is fantastic, as well as the ideas you come up with for stories. I can only hope its continued and updated. |
| Alyssa8912 chapter 1 . 6/26/2019 I lost it at Bruce Lee |
| alex2797 chapter 5 . 6/12/2019 The premise for this story is fantastic but I feel like the only thing that’s bad about this story is the slow start. Which is fine for a story with a good premise just keep going and it will gander more notice. |
| Damnata omnibus chapter 5 . 6/4/2019 Cant wait for it to start again |
| NobodyOwens5 chapter 5 . 5/15/2019 Bumber I just found it and liked the story. Well it's only hiatus, so there is still hope. Hope to see an update somewhere in the near future! |
| PasiveNox chapter 4 . 5/7/2019 wonderful |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/29/2019 Please continue, the last king its so damn good |
| iupuifan chapter 5 . 5/1/2019 I loved this concept and story, I hope you continue it at some point in the future. |
