Pleaaase continue such an interesting story

I would have read that and not about naruto go back to school for no good reason.

You have no idea about naruto and dxd do you?

Is would has been better if the story was about them being god.

I would have read that and not about naruto go back to school for good reason.

2 the power level in this fanfic.

Naruto and Sasuke they supposed to be Universal level right? And if you read the dxd novel's the dxd characters is planet level at best I should know because I read the novel's. So why is naruto having a hard time against them if he universe level?

I guess you really didn't have any idea of your own and doing the same story just like other's do in fanfic.

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man your really nerfing Naruto I mean just Indra level dxd is just a lot of hype at least toneri cut through the moon like butter the biggest explosion in dxd is country level at best Naruto blew up multiple meteors where the debres dwarfed mountain ranges

I can tell you the problem with your story.

Problem 1. You Rush the store. Naruto and Sasuke being god, people's would love to read the about them god. You just rush past that just to get to the main timeline.

Problem 2 the power scale. Naruto and Sasuke supposed to be universe level right? But have a hard time angains they creation? They creation not universe level. If you're dxd universe like the dxd universe. At best they planet's level.

Problem 3 is the same thing as others dxd x Naruto fanfic. Naruto for no reason going to the same school as issue. In many dxd x Naruto fanfic going some like this. Naruto because the mc and steel issue girls and do everything issue issue in the timeline. Or he just training issue to make his op. But the story going the same way.

I mean would be a lot to us Naruto somewhere else in the dxd universe and make new story for Naruto. Not steel issue story. Let Naruto do he own thing.

Problem you has Naruto leave heaven, why? I know he was sad but come on he just up and leave and just the Angel's without telling them he was alive. Or not try to bring Sasuke?

The story idea is good but you which the wrong. I just tell you about the problem.

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Please write more

Just admit you nerfed Naruto for the sake of the fucking plot!

I fucking love this what cemented that thought was when he lol told this man to get back in he's pokeball hahahaha I fkin died hahahahahha

This really doesn't make sense me. The power level doesn't really make sense.

Do you really don't know how powerful the dxd universe is? In it there are character's that can Destroy mountains and Island like really easy. Also there was character's who make a another dimension that was Stated was big as a Continent. both heavenly dragons are STATED to be able to smash the earth 7 times over with pure strength without buffs. And the dxd universe has lost of special techniques that is one kill movie.

Do anyone's read dxd novel? I think the dxd universe overpower Naruto universe because not all Ninja have power to destroy mountains. I mean the 5 kage was Amazing and scared at Madara destroy mountains with no effort. And if I remember right the 5 kaga at that time was supposed to be the strongest Ninja on the planet. But was scared of they mind when they seem that. And the dxd universe got lots of guys who can Destroy mountains, lsiand, and continent, The planet.

And the only planet destroy in Naruto is kaguya and her people's. She might be star level because of the star in her dimension, Naruto and Sasuke might be planet destroy. But just thinking about it the dxd universe have like 1000 of God's who can destroy the planet. Well the Naruto universe Ninja's is no where that powerful. I just put my thoughts out there.

I like.

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