| Reviews for The Monster Fair |
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shaaa0266 chapter 1 . 6/13 Это ... это просто шикарно автор-сан , я даже не знаю как описать все мои эмоции во время чтения этого шедевра . Одним словом это божественно . ! |
sarge1130 chapter 4 . 3/18 Wow! This is such an amazing story :D. The plot is strong and the OP characters really fit into this. I love that this is a sort of rendition of The Nutcracker. Buggy as the Rat King and Ivankov as a Sugar Plum is really perfect for that role. I love how you insert Buggy's sensitivity towards his red nose, lol. Also, the image of Smoker with bunny ears is now forever engraved on my mind, lol. I think I understand Ace's reaction upon seeing Smoker. LOL! I laughed so hard when you introduce Ivankov and Sabo's reaction is gold :D. Sabo's reaction is like a child's reaction after witnessing his parent's embarrassing or awkward situation, lol. Oh yes, Katakuri defeating Teach is just so short but I think it was how a children's story should end. Short but still leaves a deep impact. After all, a superhero only needs a single shot to defeat them and kids do really enjoy that :). I love the two omakes. It's quite cute how Ace and Luffy leave a note for their Sandman and Boogeyman. Quite funny how Thatch really enjoys messing up Ace's dreams, lol. Thanks for this wonderful story :D. |
sarge1130 chapter 3 . 3/18 Aww! I love how this story goes :D. I felt like a child again :). The OP characters really do fit well in this story and yes, I love the revelations who is Luffy's Sandman and Boogeyman is. I love Ace's reaction in all the scenarios he had encountered. It was like he was confused if what is happening is a dream or a reality but damn, monster or not, Ace will protect Luffy no matter what. Aww! Chibi-Law 3. The way how you describe him makes me imagine that he is like a furry, angry hamster (lol). Though small, we can see that he really is a warrior and a doctor. We can see how he inflicted damage on the orc when he broke one of its fingers. |
sarge1130 chapter 2 . 3/17 Yes, I'm too late for this but I admit that I squealed when there's a sequel. I so love this :D and I'm so excited to read what will happen in the next chapters. Your characterization for Luffy is so adorable and it makes me want to protect him too. I also love how protective Ace is. Their sibling interactions is just so cute and fluffy 3. Aww, my heart melts for cute Bun. He is like a chihuahua - so tiny yet so brave, lol. It was quite cute imagining Bun perched in Luffy's shoulders. |
VampireApple chapter 4 . 1/20 Amazing. Simply amazing. What a great ending to a truly enjoyable read! Not going to lie, I geeked out when I realized they were in the Nutcracker. I know I'm reading this like a month late, and this originally came our surinf Christmas, so it'd perfect timing. I love that Buggy is the the Rat King. I watched the 90's Nutcracker cartoon with a bunch of kindergarteners in December, and that Rat King and Buggy are so similar I kept laughing to myself reading this. I love that Ace, human Ace who thought Luffy was making stories up until a few hours before, went head to head with Buggy and did fairly well. Ivankov is the Sugarplum Fairy made me laugh so hard! I love that he's Sabo's worst nightmare! I do like that the battle between Katakuri and Teach was so short. It shows just how strong Katakuri is. Plus then got to move o to the cuteness with the kids. It was so cute that Lufgy wanted Hawkins to visit along with Sabo. I also love the little humor of Ace realizing he was back I the real world with real world responsibilities and crap that needed to be taken care of. That's one of the things I've always wondered about in fantasy adventure and horror movies- like after the movie is over the characters have to go back to real life. What is that like? I think it's the greatest thing that Luffy and Ace leave notes about their dreams. Like, simply ugh amazing. I cracked up at the note Ace left for Sabo. What a superb story. So filled with imagination. Just a wonderful read. Thank you so much for writing and posting! 3 |
fluffypuppies chapter 4 . 1/8 HURRAY! The story is finally finished, and it ended greatly! And am so proud of Luffy for staying strong and battling his fears in the last chapter. As usual, you made such a beautiful story wherein you did such wonderful effort in writing it in a way where it will promise the readers of a story with such great potential. You even designed the characters in such unique ways, and do your best in portraying them both based on their personalities as shown in canon, but also put careful consideration of how they should act in their roles in this story. Praises for such a story and looking for more stories you make in the future, whether it's a small story or a long one :D Congrats for finishing the story! |
yukino76 chapter 3 . 12/22/2019 yes Luffy go save your friends and enjoy the adventure |
VampireApple chapter 3 . 12/20/2019 This is such an amazing fic. I adore where you've put characters and the monsters you've made them into. So well done! Hawkins as Luffy's boogeyman is so cool. And poor Ace, just being dragged into this. And mini Law, so cute! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter! |
VampireApple chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 This is such an amazing world! I love the plot line. Ace is such a good older brother, and I love that Sabo is Luffy's guardian. |
VampireApple chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 Oh, my goodness, this is so adorable. I love that Law is a zombie that had to see his arms back on. |
fluffypuppies chapter 2 . 12/8/2019 Oh wow, so it finally became a series! I'm so excited of what you planned for this story for it to continue! I'm quite worried on what happened to the other Strawhat gang, but I believe they'll come soon enough. Also quite curious of how could Luffy be the key to whatever it is. I hope Ace and Luffy could make it out alive and well! By the way, I actually like your idea that Sabo is Luffy's Sandman! That's both sweet and cute to think of. I wonder who is Luffy's Boogeyman... Anyways, it's thrilling so far and can't wait for the next part to be up :D Thanks for continuing the story! |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2019 AWESOMEEEEEEE |
yukino76 chapter 2 . 12/7/2019 gentleman Sabo is in the place |
myzmsandraa99 chapter 2 . 12/7/2019 Asikkkk katakuri.. i like kataxlu Thanku for sequel |
Boralis chapter 1 . 9/6/2019 Wow what a nice story! It would be great if theres a sequel~ Is Bun just a monster or something more mystical I wonder. Thanks for the story! |