broke my heart when I found out it was a one shot. I was getting really excited.

I wonder if Dark shadow comments when the two do it is he like “ No you gotta put more energy in it” or “ Slow down you’re going too fast” Cause that would be hilarious

Ooo la la. Get some! Haha. I love that Tokoyami uses Dark Shadow to flirt. I think that idea is hilarious and pretty perfect. Great work!

AwwwwWWWW! That was SO cute! I've always wanted to see a story where these two are grown up, married, working for separate organizations as heroes, and then they run into each other on the job (no, I'm not being sarcastic. That is EXACTLY what I wanted). THIS IS A LITERAL DREAM COME TRUE!

As always, you do a great job selling it up. But man...*sight*...it really just makes me hope that it'll happen in the show...which it probably, most certainly won't. Ah, oh well. WE CAN STILL DREAM!

Great work Twist!

Haha! It's nice to see when your only errors are in your Authors note you put in before the story

Nice story. Very entertaining

Good fluff from the fluffmaster.