| Reviews for Perfectly Balanced |
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M0b1uz chapter 2 . 8/6 You wasted a perfectly good "Thanos's Home" meme... Seriously, though, I love your story so far. You've meshed Naruto with the MCU very nicely. I'm reading this because its apparently the prequel to the story I was reading first. So, you had a mental breakdown and deleted your story too, huh? Been there, Bro. Used to have ,like six stories before I snapped them out of existence - now I'm down to the two that survived. Don't know if you're a fan of DBZ of Avatar: The Last Airbender, but mine is both. give it a shot if you like. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21 fucking shit worst fic ever dont read |
Monster King chapter 13 . 4/6 Awesomeness |
ton190p chapter 5 . 11/23/2019 quick someone tell em about dat clan restoration act |
ton190p chapter 3 . 11/23/2019 gather all of the anime's |
King Popoto chapter 3 . 11/8/2019 Wow... Hinata is a piece of shit in this fic |
Kami's Apprentice chapter 1 . 11/4/2019 Well you can put this story right with your other story because it’s just as bad. One thing is that the Naruto characters are all OOC. Then you add way too many characters into the story for no reason. How would the marvel characters even know DC characters? Plot holes, character development, storyline was all bad. I wish I could block you so I don’t see anymore of your writings. Waste of my time for even giving this story a review. |
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 11/3/2019 FUCK YOU! |
armegedonknight chapter 13 . 11/2/2019 This was a fun read but I do have some complaints about what I believe are issues with the plot. Primarily that within hours of Naruto losing his loved ones, he is petitioning a woman for love instead of mourning. Further he chose to tell Hinata, hours after losing her husband and cousin that he didn't chose her. Seems unnecessarily cruel. I also have some complaints about batman using a lethal weapon and superman shouting die. It felt out of character. Most of the attempted romances with Naruto felt extremely forced. The fight scenes were good if a bit dry and disjointed. More descriptive phrases to help transistion between fights would be good there. I also don't understand why Pokemon was included but barely used given that many pokemon are generally inferior to any shinobi that knows more that 4 techniques. I enjoyed the ending but don't understand how the dusting was restricted to Animeverse. Since he had the Dimension stone wouldn't that allow cross dimensional dusting? |
Hdiaktoros chapter 2 . 8/8/2019 I thought Supergirl name is Kara danvers |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2019 This is jist confusing and cringy af. Please dont do romance. |
RandomParadox chapter 12 . 7/6/2019 And here I was hoping he’d get with shuri |
Bitch Lasagna chapter 1 . 5/16/2019 I like the story except it doesn't make sense to me because how can Kakashi just immediately accepts DC and Marvel they are from another universe? |
GamerX568 chapter 12 . 4/29/2019 Kurama was the first Tailed Beast. Other Tailed Beasts would be younger than him. |
GamerX568 chapter 5 . 4/29/2019 Naruto can't get drunk because of his advanced healing factor. |