Reviews for The End of an Era
Guest chapter 39 . 3/15/2019
Wow, great job! I loved these little one-shots and flashbacks, remembering some much of my fave stories. Can't wait for Legacies!
Guest chapter 37 . 3/15/2019
Yay! I finally got to see Chase! love it! he's such an amazing father and husband
SzymonS chapter 39 . 3/15/2019
So emotional. I cant wait to find out what is going on :)

Previous generation heroes is still working about some problem so it means that they will be important part of the stories. It makes me very happy.

My favorite part was talk between Leo and Calla at the end of lab assistant about them not being kids anymore. This is one of the saddest parts and I'm glad you put it here.

Are they gonna send Emily to Millenium Academy? Yeah, she have every right to be mad.
boarding schools sucks.

Fineas and Ferb are still in, even in 2024 :)

Legacies, here we go!
LabGirl2001 chapter 39 . 3/15/2019
Ughhh it’s so perfect I didn’t want it to end, but now I’m curious about what’s going on with Skylar and Oliver and this mysterious conversation.
I think my favorite scene in this entire book was the one that kept repeating between Calla, Chase, Adam, Douglas, and Davenport. I loved all the perspectives and how cute everything turned out.
SzymonS chapter 38 . 3/13/2019
Dani was my favorite OC. Sorry Calla.

I wanna see more twins. Can't wait to legacies, there is only 2 days left!

Dani is very complicated character. After that whole family drama she decided to go undercover and risked to lose everyone she loved. It is impossible to say if it was good or bad choice. On the one hand, at the moment when I realised what she was doing I was seriously hating her. But after emotions falled, I started admire her brave decision.

Well, I still can't objectively say if it was good idea. Yes, she stoped the greatest villain at the world but was it worth costs? Cause I read stories again, I have fresh look so let's start:

Firstly, Kaz. He was the best boyfriend any girl coud dream of. I think that after he belived in her when she was with Bridget brigade (like Wikipedia funny calls that team. Did you know your story have few sites on wiki?) Dani should let him join her when she went after Lexi (BTW, will we ever find out what happened to her?). I mean I understand the first part, Kaz would probably never let her go undercover alone. But after that, why did she left without him? Becouse EF would fall aparat? So what? Now she cares about the team? After everything he done for her, Kaz didn't deserved to be abondan again.

Secondly, Oliver. He was so screwed by that 8 months. He must fell awful. First his mother became supervillain. Next Dani, his twin which always was by side, the only family he had left, did the same thing. Skylar left on the Caldera, he and Kaz, his best friend since the begin of time stoped talking. He was completely broken and alone. That 8 months must have been a nightmare for him. Did she know that? I'm pretty sure she wasn't trying to read his mind, she would not risk to make contact. But Bridget probably was keeping eye on her son. After all, that was the point all of her plans. So, I think it would not be suspitious for her cover if she would go to mom and ask ,,How is Ollie?" After all, it was very long time. Wasn't she worry that Oliver might hurt himself? If I would be worry on another lecture I may even write one shot about that (Dont worry, I'm only writing to myself so if I will do it I promise you will be the only one who will see it)

But in the other hand, she was capeble to put the world's safety above her family and friends. She was ready to lose them all to do the right thing. When you are looking from their perspective, it was awful. But when you are not, it was just what the real hero would do.

That is the reason why Dani is my favourote OC. She caused me more conflicting emotions, than any other character in TV shows. I usually like or hate someone, but Dani is special.

Sorry for long comment, It was probably the longest one I ever wrote. But it's always better than ,,I love it", am I right? See you at ,,Calla Alexandria Davenport"
Algernon23 chapter 38 . 3/12/2019
Perfection, both this chapter and the last one. There's no other word for it. You have both wrapped up the old characters while setting everything up for the new ones, and you did it all in the most touching way possible. The number of times I have had to remind myself of which characters are canon and which are OC's is a testament to the quality of the writing you have been posting the past several years. Calling it anything less than perfect is an insult. I'm trying not to get too worked up because we still have Calla's chapter and all of Legacies to go, but it's feeling like this is the end. The new era is about to begin, and only you know how it will end. I'll hear from you soon.
LabGirl2001 chapter 38 . 3/12/2019
Gosh this chapter. I was trying not to cry/freak out while in the car with my mom. It was phenomenal and I think you did Dani justice. Also the fact that Dani and Kaz were the couple to get twins is absolutely hilarious to me cause they are the ones who are probably not the best choice for raising twins lol. But they’re rocking it.

I also see that set up for the next book. O.O
amazingchichi741 chapter 38 . 3/12/2019
I love Dani. She is my favorite. Anyway, can't wait for Legacies. Question : What do all the kids look like in the story?
SzymonS chapter 37 . 3/11/2019
I throught he was gonna be a president. But maybe later - who knows?

We already know Chase will win at least one election, Naomi throw this spoiler while her little time travel. I was sure then, that he will be president. Seriously.

OK, now the rest of chapter. Chase finnaly became less annoying teacher? With Emily it should be easier than with Adam, Bree or Leo. She seems to be very clever and ambitious. Or like Kaz would say, NERD :)

Do the scenes were put chronological? Cuz I'm pretty sure that Chase proposed Calla after the Elite Force has begin.

They are such an adorable couple. You first one in this story actualy. Fact that they are still so good together makes them even more amazing.

See Y next time!
LabGirl2001 chapter 37 . 3/10/2019
Gosh Chase, I don’t even know what to say cause he’s just Chase. Him and Calla are just perfect, and this chapter had all the great elements to properly appreciate him.
Algernon23 chapter 36 . 3/5/2019
That was adorable. It's funny that Dani and Kaz are so outgoing and their kids are so shy and quiet, but I guess being (close to) the youngest ones present would do that to you. Still, with all the kids being so similar to their parents, I'm wondering how Kira and Kameron will act when Legacies begins and if they will grow out of it. Also, Kameron and Charlotte already sound adorable together. Three more chapters! I hope you enjoy Captain Marvel (don't know when I'm gonna see it) and I'll hear from you again soon.

PS: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
SzymonS chapter 36 . 3/5/2019
I very liked Kaz too. But was he my favorite canon character? I think that was Adam.

I'm glad Kaz didn't change too much with age. As a father he is much mature, but it is still the same funny guy which always know what to say. And his and Dani's begin ing - Yay! So adorable.

And the twins. Why am I not suprise?

I'm sad becouse he and Oliver stoped seeing each other. They were such a great friends. But not everything can be perfect, right? And I'm sure they will meet soon in legacies when this whole Venus thing will come down.

Until than, happy birthday and the rest of life!
LabGirl2001 chapter 36 . 3/5/2019
Gosh this one really got me. First that commemorative fake photo really brought back some deep repressed memory from the original show and now I’m kinda sad it’s over. Then Kaz just trying to ask Dani to marry him and being all scared it’s just so adorable. I’m also in love with how Dani and Kaz take care of the kids when it comes to their powers. It’s quite hilarious.
Also random thought while reading, I know it’s not necessarily canon but could the “person” who pushed Dani off the pier be one of Argentos peeps trying to scare Bridget. Or is it just assumed that Dani jumped?
Great chapter as always I can’t wait to read more.
SzymonS chapter 35 . 2/27/2019
I'm sorry about this plagiarism stuff. I hope you dealed with this for good.

My favorite part was the wedding. It looked just so... I don't know, climatic?

And now we know that Venusians are this big problem. But I think they are gonna be a side thread, like Calderians in elite force 1 and 2 seasons, and the main villain will be someone else. But who knows, maybe you will suprise me?

And after this chapter I already like Serafina. She might be a little younger than other kids from New team, but I think that she could be leader. I don't know why, just throught. We Will see soon.

And other stuff, beside this chapter. I started read lab assistant again. It have been 3 year so I forgot some parts. (at least I have something to do during the end of hiaust) I have to admit, that now it seems even better. I attached to Jaden much more than the first time. It is amazing to see how that story and this imagine universe grown. Than you were planning only short spin off with Marcus's ravange. And although I regret we won't see it, this what you made now is so much better.

Seriously, when I compare that present DC TV series, whith all that plot holes and absurdities to your FANFICTION of SITCOM where everything makes sense and we see that everything was clearly though, I can't belive it. You deserve for bigger fandom and I'm sure that in the future you will write incredible book which I will be glad to buy. Speaking of, how many people is writing this stories? You can chack it somehow?

So, until sometime before 5th!
Algernon23 chapter 35 . 2/26/2019
I loved this chapter, especially the progression of Oliver's life from a mostly-normal little kid who loves comics to married to a superhero and living with her on her alien planet, desperately trying to make sure his half-human, half-alien daughter doesn't get involved in an inter-species war. Writing it all out like that doesn't even come close to capturing the insanity his life became. I could go on an hour long rant about things like the MCU, but this isn't the place for that. Just know that I am almost as excited for Endgame as I am for Legacies, whenever that ends up coming out. Glad you got the plagiarizing thing figured out, and I'm glad to have you back. Four more chapters till Legacies!
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