*sighs*
Pain indeed...pain indeed...

I just wanna say that you r the best writer I’ve seen so far even tho I’m new here I have read many fanfics but you are one of my favorite Arthur’s you give these characters so much deft it’s incredible and you do it with style and humor

I can totally agree with Garmadon that 'threatening Lloyd never won anyone favors.' Whether it be from the ninja or his family, Lloyd sure is safe with them around... mostly. And that segment at the end... that was so cute! Love this.

Whoa! Impressive literary feat, with one line going backwards in time and the other going forwards, and some home managing never to lose the reader! Well done! Beautiful look into the spiraling mind of Garmadon.

That last line OOF
Why must you hurt me this way
Still gonna favorite this thou

haëllo I’m way behind on other reviews but I’m back here, to say, that I’m so sad. today is just a day to be emotional about “I’ll never let anything hurt you”, that’s what today is. I’m so emotional about this lego dad. Goodnight, your words/structure are jewels in a treasure hoard, I’ve been thinking about this all day

that hurts... hehe hearts are over rated anyway

This is amazing. So we'll written. I just adored it so much. Probably my favorite fic I've read in this fandom.
I love the contrast and just the way you wrote this. Thank you so much.

*LOUD SOBBING*

MY HEART, MY FEELS, MY EVERYTHING, OH GOD THIS HURTS

But seriously, I love the insight on the Garmadon we knew and the Empty-Shell-Garmadon we have now as it goes towards the past. I think the best line in terms of irony is the last one, and iT BREAKS MY HEAR TO EVEN THINK ABOUT IT.

(also, Baby Lloyd. You included Baby Lloyd and early daddy Garmadon. I FUCKING LOVE YOU THANK YOU FOR DELIVERING THAT)

Cute

Could you do something like harumi captures lloyd and brought to garmadon I know you did on one story but coil you make it like this and add more chapters to it

Urgh, that last part! You’ve ripped out my heart and crumpled it! Fantastic writing!

oh my goodness
that was beautiful but sad and heartbreaking at the same time.
why do you do this to me. all of your stories are the same in that sense and yet I love to read them

Good grief there are so many good things about this, I don't even know where to start?

"...another hurt left by a father whose only inheritance seems to be pain." This line is so beautiful. Like, holy smokes, dude. Your writing never fails to grab me by the hair and just /yank/.

"...because a world that gives him Lloyd as a son is clearly a world in his favor." This is so good! All of it is good, but you've got some really nice sentences in here!

You know that one scene in the Lego Movie right before Emmett finds the Piece of Resistance, where he's falling down that ridiculous hole? That's what this fic feels like.

Garmadon describing Lloyd as the one thing he would tear the world apart for was such a beautiful sentiment, especially considering all the times he did tear the world apart. Man this fic is good.

And that last line? Why. WHY. WHHHYYYYYYYYYY

I honestly wish I could come up with a more coherent and thoughtful review, but as is typical of your writing, I am left to scramble for intelligent thought through all the feelings you just gave me. Wonderful job once again, my friend. You have so much raw talent, and the fact that you publish your work to be read for free is such a blessing.

Have a fantastic day!

Hahaha...this hurts my heart a lot.