ok great storey but try to put who is speaking so we dont have to guess please

This is still funny, but the text would be easier to read if it would be cut up in smaller chunks. Also, the spelling is better, but could be even better

It's great i love it

what ever is convient for u as for grammer let he or she without sin on that cast first stone. there u have a shield from stones lol

I really enjoy the story so farit is funny.

very cool

I really like this kind of stories! Please write more.

There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. Maybe you should let someone read over it before you post. I am not going to list all of it, but ‘the deaths that war caused whether it was good or bad,’ is supposed to be ‘Hades and Ares were arguing whether deaths caused by war were a good or a bad thing.’

Also you missed Hestia and Dionysus.