great chapter, some minor grammar errors in the beginning, but noting to serious, and boy did they kick Bojack's ass, he's lucky that Cell was there to pull his ass out of the fire, and now Raditz has new found motivation to train even harder than before.

really liked how your building up Twenty-one in this chapter, she's putting up so much effort to keep her dark desires form controlling her, and I really like how her reasons for doing so are much stronger than in Z fighters, with her bond with them and all the other characters she befriend, she is trying to fight her desires much harder than ever, and I really liked that you're showing the effort that she's putting.

and now Nozomi seems to be getting a male admirer as well, and its the prince of Sadala, wonder how Yagyu will react to her getting a boyfriend, and now Sadala will be getting an invader, good opportunity to test out the results of their training.

overall great chapter, looking forward for the next one.

came up with new techniques for the SK girls.

for Asuka
Spiral Wave
its her own modification to a Kamehameha, were she infuses wind based energy to make the beam spin like a wind spiral blast at a high speed, adding much more damage than a normal Kamehameha with the high spin speed of the energy, allowing her to damage a tougher opponents she would otherwise have a hard time hurting.

for Homura
Final Flair
like Asuka, Homura infuses fire based energy to the Final Flash, adding more high temperature flame damage to the beam, making it so that even if someone can take the blast, the heat will still be a problem leaving them with lasting damage, especially after an explosion.

for Yumi
Frozen Burst
just like Asuka, its an ice version of the Kamehameha, while unlike Asuka's which increases damage, this one is meant to bind someone while damaging them in a frozen beam, it works best with team work, she freezes and opponent first and has someone like Asuka follow up with a more damaging attack to a vulnerable opponent.

for Miyabi
Abyssal Cannon
is her own modify version of Big Bang Attack infuse with her black flames, similar to Homura using high intense heat to leave lasting damage to her opponent, only in the form of a blast type ki attack over a beam, same effects, different methods and uses.

what do you think of these techniques, I figure since they are learning form Goku and Vegeta right now, it would make sense that they make their own modifications to the techniques they learn form them, making their own unique versions.

I’m curious, are you planning to convert their weapons into ki powered weapons? Because I know some of their current weaponry are obsolete thanks to ki and I would like to se something like that. Though I’m currently on chapter 33.

Did Goku taught King Kai Instant Transmission?

You called Asuka “Caulifla” a couple of times.

Will Hercule interfere in the Cell and Bojack fight because if Cell announces another tournament I think he will not sure though also who will fight Cell and Bojack first?

great chapter, its always great to see all the other characters doing their own thing from time to time, really liked how you made Marron see Eighteen's students as role models and wants to be like them, and she even learned how to fly to be more like them too, and it was smart of Eighteen to teach her to fly so she can escape danger if need be.

also great idea having the other teachers have their students train with the other New Wave characters, its a good way for them to meet each other and get stronger too, and having Seventeen and Eighteen be the first ones to do it made the most sense too, gald to see you givng the new Wave characters some screen time too.

and Bojack attacks Zangya and Raditz when Goku and the majority of the strongest Z fighters are off world, good thing Bardock and Shaya showed up when they did and now Zangya finally transform into her Super Hera form and Bardock finally transform into Super Saiyan 2, things are heating up now, looking forward for the next fight, keep up the good work ;)

I like this story and I know you might not respond to this comment but everything I hear he is death, I know that is wrong it’s suppose to say he is dead. Just trying to correct your words is English not your first language

great chapter, nice to see this story get an update again, I really enjoyed it, it had good character build up for relationships, especially with Nozomi, seems like her skills and strength will earn her a lot of respect points from the Saiyans, and it did a really good job at showcasing so many characters without overshadowing anything, that was really good.

and especially liked how you even but in the extra effort to showcase some of the new wave characters here, showing Yuyaki's team training with Broly .Jr during the training arc before the battle and even giving Reika and Hiroko some screen time by showing that they're filling in for Haruka at work for Bulma while still doing their own training on the side, I really liked that you included them all like this.

you should definitely keep showcasing the new wave characters like that, showing they're doing during this training arc just like you did here, by having one or two teams make a short appearance for each upcoming chapter so they don't overshadow the story pacing, until the training arc is done, and it would fit in well if it was done like it was in this chapter, and it wouldn't fell out of place seeing how Seventeen showed up in the last chapter to show what he learned of Dr. Gero, and Zangya helping Raditz train, so their students making a short appearance with them won't feel out of place like that, like Zangya's student's helping her or Raditz train so they can achieve their transformations and Seventeen's students helping him look for Dr. Gero.

and now Goku is stepping up their training and is finally ready to teach them the Kaioken, their training just went up by a whole other level, and now Cell has finally revived Bojack and recruited him, but he forgot that he still had one wish left and didn't use it, his loss LOL, wonder if the Nameks will use it or not.

overall great chapter looking forward for the next one.

Q- Will the New Wave characters make cameo appearances throughout the coming chapter as the main cast trains.

MOAR PLZ :)

Where is buu I want to see him.

Is , was and always will be garbage

great chapter, lots of story build up and character bonding moment here, really enjoyed them, and now we finally know the real reason why Goku and Vegeta are training the SK girls is to help save Hyoki and Fubuki's groups form themselves while they deal with Cell.

and now Cell is going after the Namekian Dragon Balls to bring Bojack back as an ally, guess Zangya will get the chance to take down Bojack after all, and now Hyoki and Fubiki's groups are also planning on going after the old Supreme Kai to unlock their potential and get their own mystic forms and later force their why into the hyperbolic time chamber to get some extra training time, guess now the rest of the SK girls will also get their potential unlocked by the old Supreme Kai once they learn that Hyoki and Fubuki's groups already did and will need it too to match them, should be easy for them to get the old Kai to agree to it LOL, and Dr. Gero is now making plans for a new android to replace Twenty-one, wonder how strong this one will be.

nice to also see some more Gohan and Asuka moments as well, it's really good build up for them to set up their weeding arc, I know you said that you plan on having Gohan ask her after the whole thing with Cell is over, but in most animes with similar situations, like the anime Wiseman's Grandson, the guy will confess or propose to the girl before the battle to either motivate themselves or so they don't have any regrets going into battle without telling the girl their feeling, it might be better if Gohan proposes to Asuka before the battle with Cell to give them both stronger motivation to win and come back to each other, what do you think, its up to you if you want to do it before or after.

and now kid Trunks's group is going to school in planet Sadala and making friends with Caulifla and Kale's friends, and they are going to meet the prince of Sadala too, wonder how that's going to turn out, looking forward to it, great chapter keep up the good work.

question- if both Bulma and Twenty-one make the machine to travel between the two universes, and both get activated at the same time, will the portals connect with each other and become more stable and use up less energy, or will it not be affected by each other and just open up separate portals.

great chapter gald to see it get updated again, the grammar has improve as well, still a few minor mistakes, but its still a big improvement, and you really did a god job at multitasking a lot of events and different perspectives in this chapter, and showing the progress of everyone's training at a really good pace, and even showing other perspectives like Bulma, Gine and Zangya during all this was also a nice touch.

and speaking of Zangya, we finally get to see her weeding with Raditz, too bad the timing wasn't all that great with Cell back and the kids with Twenty-one are stuck at universe six, made it difficult for them to have a prefect atmosphere for the weeding, but they made it work, BTW I feel like you missed a really good opportunity with Zangya during the events of Fusion Reborn, it would have been a really great moment if she had to fight a resurrected Bojack and surpassed him with her Super Hera form that she gains form all her training.

well overall great chapter, looking forward for the next one, BTW got some questions.

1st- will we be seeing Yuyaki and the rest of the Touno Tenju team growth form Broly Jr's training in the near future.

2nd- have any, if not all, of the New Wave girls gotten in a relationship with a Saiyan off screen, or are some still single.

3rd- and finally have you ever considered having the Heras having a transformation beyond Super Hera, like a Super Hera 2, and have Zangya be the first one to achieve it.

Good chapter out there. I like they learn new techniques in this chapter. Good job keep it up!

great chapter, it's great to see you up date this fic again, and the grammar is so much better as well, and a lot was said and done in this chapter, like showing Goku and Vegeta training their individual groups of SK girls and the training that they're doing, nice to see that Goku is going to teach the team leaders the Kaioken, Gohan and F Trunks training together to push their mystic forms to their limit, Cell's group of students and their point of on what they're doing during and after training, and how they are surviving on an alien planet, and showing how things are with Trunks group in universe six and foreshadowing Twenty-one falling to her mad alter ego, all these thing were done in a really good pacing, nothing felt out of place, and even adding all the other smaller events like Raditz and Zangya planning to marry fit in so well with the pacing.

and now with a one month time skip, Caulifla has now achive Super Saiyan, and the way she and Trunks are interacting is a really good build up for setting them up as a couple, I can already see the dynamic between the two as a pairing, and the same with Goten and Kale, you already set up a good foundation on starting a parring with them when you had Goten fine her asleep next to her parents grave seeing just how much she misses her parents, helping him to understand her better, with Trunks and Caulifla its more of respect, trust and acknowledgement of each other as individuals that is gained with constant training with each other, and being more straight forward with each other, while with Goten and Kale, a much more gentler approach of understanding is required.

overall great chapter, it was really well written and well paced, looking forward for the next update when Trunks's group on Sadala will fight that Aminon guy, and the progress of everyone's training.