Reviews for Perfect Storm
Mr.Anonymous69 chapter 4 . 7/20
This is awesome, I’ve just spent all night reading most of your story’s and this is by far the one I’m most invested in, and seeing as you want any kind of suggestion for scenes, plot etc. I thought I would provide, plot, I dunno, not really clear on whether or not Issei is a devil or a fallen angel and is in ‘Possession’ of Kuoh town, but the overall plot could be, defending Kuoh town from Kokabiel and Raynare, along with Issei and Akeno working their way through her ptsd along with some heartwarming love scenes, for individual scenes, I’m not sure, maybe something like Akeno has gone shopping and she runs into ‘Yuuma’, and they get into a girl fight or something, and Issei who was getting rice balls or something from a local shop arrives and breaks it up, keep up the good work man, saving his angel for last cause it’s the longest and looks complete.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/12
This might be fairly obvious but, just look at the base story and adjust accordingly to what they would do, an idea for the story that I’m still on the fence about that you could do is have Akeno take the teasing too far and out a whole in his heart when he couldn’t take it anymore/ him trying to move on from her to other people and the stuff around that, of course later they would confesses and get together but, that could be a good emotional speed bump ish
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 4 . 5/26
My feels!
kazuakisama chapter 4 . 5/9
I have a bit of a weakness for stories about two damaged people leaning against each other. I don't really have any criticisms, since the story as it is is fairly short. Still, I have a great time reading it and I think this is my favorite DxD fanfiction.

As for ideas? I'm a masochist and Akeno not telling Issei she likes him should be played for maximum drama, in my opinion. Have a love triangle, make Issei feel he's not worthy of Akeno, have them be forcibly separated, have one of them tell the other that they hate them so they can protect them, or something to that effect.

Though I suppose this is labeled fluff, so if you don't want to go for maximum drama, you could elaborate on their relationship with occult research club or the student council. Maybe Akeno tries to get Issei to make more friends, since you mentioned he doesn't have any friends in class. Or a section about their relationship with other fallen angels. And finally, a chapter about them training together, since presumably they've both done that.
SlickGohan chapter 4 . 5/6
Great Story you've got here don't stop, also you were asking for suggestions so how about this, Akeno one day turns up the thermostat and begins stripping or something similar idk it's a suggestion
noble6117 chapter 4 . 4/28
Fookin awesome m8! Keep it up. I want more updates.
A Plexx chapter 4 . 4/17
Still loving the fic keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15
I read "single pairing" and "fluff" and clicked without thinking. Should've known you'd be the writer lol.
Laserbr0 chapter 4 . 4/16
This was very good. Thank you for the update. I didn’t get the beginning since it’s been a while but I must’ve read it wrong lol. But thanks for the update and can’t wait for more.
J.S.Gibson chapter 4 . 4/16
Thanks for the update! Akeno is my favorite character and I really enjoyed where you’ve taken this story so far. Keep the chapters coming it’s very well written.
Curse of Whimsy chapter 4 . 4/16
Oh sure, pile on the trauma higher why don't you. In all seriousness though, it's a good idea, and it makes sense given the flashback. Didn't seem to have any issues frying Viser though, so I'm guessing it's more the noise of thunder than the sight of lightning that sets her off?

And anyone would be a boob person growing up around a non-blood related Akeno. I'm not even sure that would be restricted to just guys, honestly.

I approve of Yasaka's in private personality being just as fluffy as all those tails, and the letters from Kunou made me laugh. Did a good job of balancing the queen with the mom there.

Hope Akeno doesn't drag things on too long, while it's kind of in character it would be cruel to prolong things too much.
Ace chapter 4 . 4/13
I did not see that coming with Akeno. Will she be able to start the first step in conquering her fear if she can? Did they meet Azazel beforehand? Also you said Kuoh was Red Dragon territory where is Rias and Sons in all of this? Also will Koneko or Irina (is she Issei's friend in this story or no?) be involved in the story?
Khaal chapter 4 . 4/13
Nice
Guest chapter 4 . 4/13
Great chapter cant wair for the rest
vanhellsing9000 chapter 4 . 4/13
This is such a sweet and adorable story i honestly hope that Akeno and Issei get marred and have kids in the not too distant future looking forward to the next chapter keep up with the fantastic work
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