EXCELLENT WORK CANT WAIT FOR MORE OF THIS AWESOME WORK

Oh how I missed this. Despite long chapters you do an excellent job of keeping your readers hooked in. Looking forward to the next one. Thank you.

Seriously I love this story but you need to at the very least space out your chapters. When you upload multiple in a single day it tends to confuses people. Beyond that I found it funny how scar effectively described traditional marriage down to a T. Guess he hasn't researched traditional marriage in human society yet.

Still looking forward to more, thank you.

Great story!

Looks like its time for lex to go shopping for some firepower and a lot of it. Nice chapter and please keep it up, thank you

I'm sorry but you're so off when it comes to scars age! He is not 51 he's literally like 16-18 years old in the movie.

Un-Blooded Yautja are usually young inexperienced hunters that fall behind even a Young Blood in rank. They are not yet experienced enough to participate in a Xenomorph Hunt.

Meaning Scar had gained enough experience so he was allowed to go into the temple to proved his right of passage to become a true warrior. This is why you are also wrong to say that he's been meeting with a bunch of other females when females wouldn't pay him the time of day without his tribe Mark proving that he was a worthy Warrior.

I know this is fanfiction but you should at least keep your facts straight when it comes to your characters yes scar maybe a alien but they do age like humans just really slow and they have a longer lifespan past 500 they can live up to almost a thousand...

As much as I enjoy your story I have to point out that you made a mistake... okay there are a lot but I'm just pacifically pointing this one out!

But Unblooded Yautjas which Scar was before he entered the temple in the movie is not seen as Warrior so females will not mate with them Nor will they give them the time of day.

I know I said I was just going to point out one but I'm also going to point these out too...

You tend to repeat yourself a lot and I mean a lot you phrase the same words between your characters (which is not necessary) and you don't have to repeat the last line from one person's point of view to another also you should probably put a symbol down to let your readers know that you're switching point of views if not break off and start a new sentence or paragraph.

I found it confusing at times when character's point-of-view suddenly change to another character without warning I would just be reading and wouldn't find out that the point of you have been changed until the person's name was brought up.

Also you made it loud and clear that she's on the ship and Scar is part of the shadowclan you don't have to repeat yourself in almost every chapter reminding us that. (It starts to become annoying having to constantly see it brought up).

Okay I accidentally read the last chapter first and just caught up on this one. I'm guilty of reading smut but I must say yours sounds like it was written with true love in mind as it didn't feel like porn. More like it truly represents what sex should be and not what its generally used for.

To save yourself for that special someone to spend the rest of your life with. My lord you just created a sex scene that felt truly fluffy.

Now I can't help but wait anxiously for that Rosa guy's jaw to drop when Lex reintroduces Scar as her husband, that will be hilarious.

As for the other chapter I, get the feeling Wolf is now going to go full Punisher on Cage and killed my clan, now I'm going to kill yours. Thanks and keep it up.

Great chapter and i dont mind the length as i truly wish to read more and more about Lex/ Scar romance the way you write it. Looking forward to the next installment.

Roses are red, violets are blue, that had such good fluffy in it, it made me want to moo. Now I must say not many can make me write this like a play. For you are the second to now trigger my poetic spirit, like a bullet heading into a deer to kill it. Is this all, fear not for as they say, love knows no bounds like star cross lovers ready to slay.

For I end this masterpiece and say, Thank you have a wonderful day.

Who raised Lex to be an idiot? Why tell him anything when you already work in sketchy circumstances and won’t tell scar? Now you got Pablo spying around. She’s gonna bring them trouble

Implied face palm. I should have noticed that but didn't till the end of the chapter. Now I have to go back and read the the others. Plus I feel like an idiot for not noticing it sooner. haha

Also you surprise me, if this dude is anything like his brother then this could get good. On the plus side Scar accidentally gave himself good publicity since criminals are going to be running scarce. On another note, I wonder if Scar has yet to tell Lex that Yautja ironically enough translates to Predator in english. whether this was done on purpose or by accident is anyone's guess.

I look forward to the next chapter, thank you.

Funny the most probable cause from the Wiki was it was the Engineers who created them. Human androids wouldn't know how to do this at all being impossible hosts for the Xenos and the fact in Covenant the Android didn't make them, rather he found them and became their delivery system.

Also Scar becoming a Predator Punisher now that is epic. Keep it up. Thank you.

Your not the the only one, however, killing a fully equipped clan may prove difficult as more often then not Pirate vessels are ill equipped to take on full blown warships.

I wouldn't be surprised if they moved the Xenos to the lab because they know of Scar. After all having a Predator around adds both an extra form of containment should they get out and live data on how Preds deal with them. Knowing Weyland though they likely have enough cameras to record every bit of the fight. However for some reason I'm not getting any hint of a potential capture of Scar by them in this fic. Am I wrong because you seem to take inspiration and then do something else which is both nice and unpredictable. I look forward to the next chapter, thank you.