Is this going to continue?

Keep writing.

Title says it all. There might be a story buried somewhere in here but the grammar, and is so bad I can barely read it.

I can do it... You need someone to fix your grammar

Not bad.

I love Henrietta.

love it,

but don't give saito or any other nation modern weapons you know guns and shit

By Jove. There are a lot of spelling errors here.

These are stretching from minor spelling errors a nd capitalization, to full on grammatical screw ups going from tenses to replacement of proper words.

Pleas, rewrite this chapter. It looks promising, but I can't go on.

must be an abo for your english to be this horrible

A good story.
Perhaps if you could revive prince Wales somehow then Henrietta might be willing to surrender peacefully.
You have shown them your might, therefore you could give them a chance to avoid more bloodshed.

Might have forgotten to mention it before I think it's better if you try not to tell the reader what's going on too much. (In other words, don't brief up on what happened but instead describe what happened. Ie showing how the actual battle went instead of saying 'oh we had a battle, lost a few tanks but it was an easy victory for us'.)

Though there are scenarios where telling is better than showing, those usually involve trying to pry into said characters brain. It's generally better to show the reader to keep them engaged.

I really love the premise of your story, and I am completely understand that your struggle with English grammar and punctuations may have something to do with English not being your native tongue. You can send me a message if you need an editor and proofreader for your story. It helps a lot with the fic quality my friend.

Pearl Harbor? More like the Six-day war with how many enemies Hans has to beat back.

Regardless, the story seems to be going smoothly (Though I do see some spelling/grammatical errors) here and there.

Would like to see the differences between Hans in future chapters compared to now, modern war does have a reputation of fucking up the psyche after all.

Damn. Revalutin!

Very interesting story. I truly hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story. I hope our Protagonist will win against Saito and his friends and show all the nobles to never underestimate the commoners. Saito is actually very useless since he needs the runes to do actually damage and all our favorite Hero needs to do is to simply cut off his arm or hand and Saito will be done for.