Reviews for X-Ray Victor Charlie:The Chronicles of Strike-3
AmethystPone chapter 1 . 1/17
Ayyy...A promising but dead story.
UN Peacekeeper chapter 14 . 6/24/2019
Hmm.. looks like Isara's planet got invaded by outsiders. or else why marina would be in their ship and getting experimented on.
Golbez4 chapter 12 . 3/2/2019
Jack better watch out or Monika will go Doki Doki on him.
blueassassin996 chapter 10 . 2/12/2019
well this just got interesting I can't wait to see what happens next.
Does Isara have phonic potental?
will old wounds be reopened with the Darsen and the Valkeryia?
And what feats of engineering will Isara bring to Xcom?

hope to see another chapter soon.
DamnedBeret chapter 7 . 11/24/2018
Oh shit...

XCOM got some buff.
Alpha chapter 1 . 10/18/2018
Very good, man. Keep it up.
UN Peacekeeper chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
India gone dark.I hope we have gone down fighting to the end.
Zues Killer Productions chapter 4 . 10/18/2018
Guy gets most of his face burned off due to plasma burns? 10 days in the sick bay.

Granted, the Rapid Recovery Perk might be on by this point (and/or he has the Second Heart Gene mod, and no one felt any importance towards telling Isara about the MELD substance beforehand), not to mention that he has Carapace Armor, so his survivability isn't really out of place.

And leave it to the Tank Girl to be an engineer. Because everyone loves grenades in Long War.
Zues Killer Productions chapter 3 . 10/16/2018
It seems that Isera is coping pretty well, despite being temporary displaced to another dimension. I will admit that I don’t usually see an overview of the host organization’s capabilities that quick in a fanfic...then again, since she’s gonna be fighting with XCOM, even during the Long War, she might as well know what’s where.

So May in Long War...according to the research I’ve found, tends to be where Mutons make an appearance...and there’s 30 dead already?

That’s XCOM Baby.

(I see what you did with Beaglerush’s cameo and the List being canon, you sly dog)
Mkoll chapter 2 . 10/15/2018
Question, might have skimmed over it, but does she have a Ragnaid or any Ragnite on her? Knowing Xcom they would love to research a pocket sized first-aid kit for EVERY soldier.
Zues Killer Productions chapter 2 . 10/15/2018
Ok, for a crossover that involves one person joining up another faction to fight with them...this chapter isn’t bad. It establishes what XCOM goes through (as well as a hint of what happens behind the scenes). Even though Isera (sic) came from a time period analogous to fantasy WWII, and should logically be confused at some of the newer advances in modern tech, I’m willing to chalk it up to “I’m still trying to wrap my head around this now.”

Oh, and since this is Long War, I hope you take the game mechanics into account (fatigue, added will loss over time, Beeglerush-proof Aliens, etc), and not simply go with what is in by default...or at least state offhandedly that there’s a fatality or two every other mission.

You wouldn’t believe the amount of XCOM fanfics that ignore the “Early Game Hell” thing...actually, considering lasers and carapace have been shown, I’m wondering what’s next: EXALT, the Elders, or both (a thing in Long War apparently).

...I think I’m actually looking forward to how this turns out. Remember, we will be watching.
Sothe17 chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Wow, never thought I needed this crossover. But damn was I wrong. This was well written and the culture shock, and subsequently Isara’s realization of her death, is believable. Keep up the great work.
Zues Killer Productions chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
You know, after what happened with the First Order in RWBY (Motion Sensors? Bio foam? We’re they supposed to be Stormtroopers or Spartans? If you wanted Spartans, just write Spartans), I was under the impression that most of the fics were intended as B-movie style fanfics, and that’s fine. So long as you didn’t screw up continuities, I was willing to let bygones be bygones.

So imagine my suprise when there’s another VC crossover...and they’re completely unprepared AND thrown into XCOM, the sacrificial later to the RNG Goddess. It was a welcome suprise.

Keep it up dude.