"This isn’t how the story is supposed to go. It isn’t supposed to be written like this. What fates made life this way? They don’t know what a story is. They don’t know how things are supposed to work. They wrote me wrong. I’m supposed to be the narrator, not an active character in life."

That was just too amazing- I can really see Mark saying that too.

It was so cute! Awesome writing.

NO WAY

You're not allowed to end there!

It's... forbidden!

What a tease.

Gorgeous fic.

I usually don't go for the ones where Mimi's all of a sudden out of the picture but this worked. It really worked.

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!

Please don't say you're one of those modest writers who can't do the sex scene.

-Laura

WAI! WAI WAI WAI! That was so...ARG! It was wonderful! _ I love that. 'Shut up...' *snicker* I should try that one on my girlfriend sometime...But she'd hit me. o_O;

WAI! WAI WAI WAI! That was so...ARG! It was wonderful! _ I love that. 'Shut up...' *snicker* I should try that one on my girlfriend sometime...But she'd hit me. o_O;

I like the tense atmosphere through the whole story. Very well written. Very sensual. I love it!

Hai! _ This is the first work of yours I've read, and already I'm in love! You capture a lot of detail in the choice of words you use, as well as the depths of emotion to add to your drama.
I shall scamper off to read another of your fics soon, I know it will be delightful, regardless of your artist's self-depreciation! *wink*
~gok~

There are no words... Just... Beautiful.

I liked this. I would like to read what happened with Mimi, if you write another part, because I feel like the story is missing that. But, yeah. Very nice. I look forward to that possible second chapter. ;)

Your story is great, Emu-chan. A lot of writers write a moment that lasts a lifetime in a character's mind so that it takes only fifteen seconds to read, but you really made me feel as though I were Mark. You're a great writer. _

P.S.: Card Captor Sakura ...