Yes! Rouge the Bat for the win!

Friend please do not spoil this story anymore, you have an interesting plot and I like the general concept but please do not fall into the easy plot of family hatred and excessive hatred towards Sasuke and Sakura. Seriously I always hated that they exaggerated their bad qualities, that is a vague writer to please the haters of these 2 characters, the letters are worth demanding but demanding a rank is not even possible.

PS: seriously this is a good concept of history I would recommend that in the future or attenuate this from Sasuke or better yet rewrite the previous chapters to remove that excess of hatred, the traditional sasuke is already in itself quite idiotic it is not necessary to do it Drop your intelligence and increase your ego.

1) "How about we let a Duel decide this... " Asuma tried saying before Kiba interrupted him.

...because who cares about orders from the village leader when two spoiled brats are complaining and Asuma opening his mouth when Kakashi hadn't, am I right?

This count as insubordination?

2) Why? Why would he agree to put nearly everyone he cares about on the line and sending himself home defenseless testing his luck for no damn reason?

When you really care for someone you dont pointlessly freaking bet their lives and happiness for no reason.

All he had to do was say they follow orders given by the hokage or he heads home and tells the hokage they refused his orders. Which considering what was already on that scroll would've damned him.

Add to that if he wins after risking all of their lives is for them to simply follow freaking orders from the hokage?

Orders they will still likely ignore even if he wins because if they're willing to ignore the hokage why the fuck would they make good on a bet?

Something that Naruto should be very aware of so him threatening to go back would be way more effective.

Seriously though, what's with all the lines about respecting superiors when they're disobeying their own? Including that they're disobeying him who was given command and hence their superior even if temporarily.

3) I've noticed it several times and too many make this mistake.

Definitely. - not defiantly.

First, not a fan to what's been done with his family and Tsunade. Second, Minako was dropped in her head? The actual fuck? That shit ain't right and just makes me feel sorry for her because she was raised that way plus dropped.

Also interesting Zabuza was bumped up to S rank. More so that the mission becomes A rank for facing an S rank foe along with the danger of some spirits.

Why another neglect story with a reasoning that makes no fricken sense whatsoever.

They actually believed he wouldnt mind and dont even have a negative reaction to him suffering his whole life?

Couldn't bother to contact or visit individually?

Couldn't send Tsunade over to raise him?

Assuming they actually believed it was dangerous for Maruto to be near his sister is the reason they didnt bring him that is.

I'm not a fan of neglect stories as it is but when there isnt even the slightest effort to make any sense ita all the more annoying.

- Does this also have Kurenai bashing? Cause that's amusingly good.
- I always thought that Shino could use well the moth cards. But yeah, his deck can be disturbing.
- Interesting duels there. I'll be looking forward to see what will Naruto do with the senseis.
- Naruto is going to leave Konoha after the Chunin Exams? Interesting future plans.

interesting new chapter

Will Blue Eyes White Dragon appear.

Cool chapter

can you have Shikamaru say "What a Drag"?, and it's really "Magic" cards.

FINALLY I thank you for updating this I've been waiting for forever can't wait for the next one and the rest of your stories to be updated

Cool chapter continue please.

Hmm, seems the rookies barely made it out of these battles anyways keep up the great work!

Can't wait for chapter 11!

Love it.
Great to have you back in this story.
Great update as always.
I can't wait what happens next.