wish you didn't have him share his conquests, they are his not anybody else's

Wow this is interesting keep it going

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I love this story can you update more often

Really like the choices of characters you used in this. Hope to see them get some action soon.

Well I’m dropping this story for how cringey it already is.

Bad luck on this story!

What is wrong with you people? Why the hell would you use incest in your story?

You really had to bring in chakra in a modern world setting? -_-

Was doing secret organizations and gangs not enough for you to masturbate to while living in your truck?

This story is bad if you had to jam in the seduction in to two short chapters that don’t develop her seduction well at all.

The future chapter must be horrible to read as well.

Wow, no wonder this story is horrible.

You can’t even write better descriptions for foreplay or any sexual encounters without looking like some story that was thrown in to the trash!

Why don’t you enlist in a English class before trying to do a story?

Only homeless fags try to talk down to trolls LOL

You skip or skim over the lemons... which is weird when it's the smut part that is advertised in the summary...

Also I was disappointed when you added chakra to the story... it doesn't fit the story...

While I'm not the biggest fan of "Here's an existing real-life place, let's add Anime to the setting", I think you played it rather well. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. Hope you have a good one.

A polyamorous relationship is different from a harem. You should probably just change the description to avoid confusion and unwanted flame by some people.

I guess I’m dropping this story if this author reacts to trolls in a non-mature way.