Reviews for White Knight of the Commonwealth
Devildogg20 chapter 6 . 8/7
This looks great, I’ll be watching.
JustAnotherGuest chapter 6 . 7/18
RIP random faunus slaughtered by insane fallout armored man. But no matter. JAUNE ANTI-HERO ARC WILL SAVE THE DAY HEUEHYEUEHAHAHAHAHHAEHAHHAUEHAHDUD *COUGHS IN CORONA* Ahurry pls
Im dying
Dat-boi-waddup chapter 2 . 7/11
Daffuk is this trained jaune nerfed as hell?
Guest chapter 6 . 7/5
No, not a cliffhanger.
Knight of the Thorn crown chapter 6 . 7/5
NOOOOOoooo! not a cliffhanger, I need MORE! lol.

on a serious note, I want to thank you (technically all good authors) for taking up the pen and giving some joy and artistic value into this world. A world which happens to be struggling as of now (not that the world never struggled, just it is struggling uniquely in this civilized and modern earth.)

either way, thanks for the value this story brings me.
DragonTetho chapter 6 . 7/5
When's the next update man? Man, the cliffhanger can't wait for Jaune to realize he's back.
Own chapter 6 . 7/5
Keep up the great work man also next time please inform us when your next writers block happens
Own chapter 6 . 7/5
Great book but one thing about us authors is that we don't have unlimited imagination we can't pull a chapter out of our ass in a day and usually I half ass my chapters when I got nothing so fuck you writers block and fuck your mother and your mother's mother and your mother's mothers mother
Avachar98 chapter 6 . 7/4
I can’t wait for more this Is getting close to the big reveal and seeing what Jaune brought back with him
Tetho chapter 5 . 4/16
Another one bites the dust god dangit, I wanted to know how it will work out.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/3
Chapter length needs to be longer but overall good
Meowsicle chapter 1 . 3/11
Wow very cool
paradoxreader chapter 5 . 2/27
nice story n hope to see updates XD...curious how it will go and i love jaune with a reliastic badass upgrade especially one who didnt go full emo routeor crazy evil route haha...man hope jnor gets form n he falls for pryhha but doesnt realise she fall for him so he hesitates to do anything cause view himself as tainted...plus curious how his family and twin will come into play...so much potential! hope u keep this up !
Malgrath chapter 5 . 2/15
Compared to anything Dust round are shit poor, I can see the bullets Ruby fires most of the time and are supposed to be .50 cal AP.
The Reading Dragon 666 chapter 5 . 1/2
So, will Jaune have must of his weapons?
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